Stomach

[modnargnihtemos]

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[PennLady]

I can only guess this isn't the whole story? If so, I believe it's too short (Lit has a 750-word minimum).

It appears your narrator is neither a breast or butt man - he's a stomach man, right?

Your punctuation is off, as well. For example, this sentence: However, it is more than that, I love women the curve of the body, the smooth skin and the soft voice.

would probably read better something like:

However, it's more than that. I love women: the curve of their bodies, their smooth skin and soft voices.

Also, is there more to these characters? Are they friends with benefits? Best friends who are falling for each other? Is the woman someone the narrator has had a crush on but never acted on it before?

I could get more detailed but didn't want to get into minutiae; if you'd like, I could do that in a private message.

 

[modnargnihtemos]

PM me for sure

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