Still Life With Teeth

Weird Harold

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An outsanding character study. A tad bit morbid, and definitely not a 'happily ever after' ending. Nevertheless, it's a good, thought provoking read.

Oh yeah, the sex scenes aren't all that bad either. If you're looking for steamy graphics, they're not what you're looking for, but they fit into the story seamlessly.
 
Thank you. I wasn't sure how people would react to this story, since it really had to do with inner pain.

It makes me feel wonderful to know that someone liked it.
 
Make that two! I enjoyed it, as well. Your descriptions were vivid enough to make me cringe during some parts, and smear an evil grin across my face at others. I especially enjoyed the part about needing something to eat..."carrot, nut...something that you could crunch like bones." The last sentence in your story had me chuckling a bit, too...playing with your food. Quite clever.

Very well written...I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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Thank you! I should probably dedicate the crunching bones part to a certain person; he really inspired it.
 
CreamyLady...I didn't realize you knew my ex-husband! He has a way of making most women feel like crunching bones!
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*laughing* Was he YOUR ex-husband? Gracious, I thought he was MINE!
 
Could be the same guy...my ex gets around! LOL

How 'bout one of us write a story about the ex's being shipped off to an island full of canibals? That would give a whole new meaning to the term "giving head"...in a crunchy kinda way! (Oh my! Did I say that? I'm not bitter...no, not at all!)
 
I can't do it. I might gag.

You'll have to write it, for all of us . . .
 
LMAO...not sure I could do it either. While I enjoy a good horror flick, that one might even be a bit too much for me. It was just a thought.
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