Sticky in the dark

[Sweetwood]

Please read my new poem at

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=47844

and enjoy. Let me know your thoughts

 

[WickedEve]

This is a good poem. Title is an attention grabber. It made me want to know all about sticky things that may be in my dark. What's her unfortunate condition? Picasso's her gynecologist?

 

[callableborg]

sticky in the dark

Picasso as a gynecologist? You are wicked.

Also liked the poem. Thought at first it was a guy with an attraction to a co-worker. Also thrown a bit by the mysterious condition. Nice title.

 

[Star At Sunrise]

Interesting

Interesting poem you've got there. You have a flair for some images, and the poem becomes clearer at the end, which reflects again on the "fantasies" mentioned in the beginning.

"The bunched up muscle ropes"
* Unusual image.

"With frogs tunes playing in the
Night of spring."
* My favorite line, though I thought it was clumsy the first time I read it.

"All this has swelled to aching fullness
The member of my bodies family
And without thought or sense
The other members wandered down there
And started touching, probing, raising
Hell – of the exciting kind"
* I never thought of masturbating as "rasing hell!"

 

[Sweetwood]

Thanks for the comments

Thank you for the comments. The poem is a humorous reflection on the surprising vagaries of married life. You never know when it's gonna hit you.

The mysterious unfortunate condition of my wife comes and goes thank God. *laughs and winks*