Renegade
Strange and Disturbed
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OOC: Ok let's get this thing started. For those who might have missed my other thread the basic premise of this Star Wars thread would be after Return of the Jedi and happens at a rebel base. The story will follow the characters inside of the rebel base and there adventures through space and time. The characters will probably go on adventures if the thread gets popular enough and your characters could be a human,alien,jedi,or android. Hell if you want you can be a spy for the empire. On the suggestion of LukeX the planet that the rebel base is one will also be where an ancient temple is at so that we can have jedi knights in training involved alot in the story. So your character can be either a regular human or a jedi in training. So let's begin this.
Here's my character:
Name: Zen
Rank: Jedi Knight
Powers or Skills: Jedi Knight. Use's a traditional green light-sabre. Skilled in many forms of hand to hand combat. The force is strong with him. His psychic abilitys are stronger then the average jedi.
Physical Description: 23 years old. 6'1. Slim but Muscular. Short dark hair. Has a big claw mark across his chest. Clean shaved. Wears the traditional jedi uniform.
Background: His parents ran away from the Empire with him when they found out he could control the force. Got the claw mark across his chest from an alien that killed his family and almost killed him. He was saved by Yoda who then raised him when he realised he could control the force. Trained under his master Yoda. Zen is not his real name but is the alias that yoda gave him to protect his identity from the Empire. He doesnt know his real name. Had been in hiding during the original trilogy under orders from yoda. Yoda told him to stay in hiding due to his fear that the empire would kill or try to turn him if they discovered he could use the force. Joined the rebels after he discovered Yoda had died. Now swears to help destroy the last of the empire's forces to avenge his master.
IC: As I run the exercise course for the third time today I think to myself how things are different since the rebels defeated the Empire. I also think of how I should have been there to help. But I had to honor Master Yoda's wishes. I think to myself "Master Yoda...how I wish I could have been there with you during your final hours. Damn the Empire for all the pain they have caused me and those I care for!!!"
Just then a blast from a droid hits me in the shoulder! I grab my arm in pain as I roll out of the way. I curse myself for not paying attention as I bring out my lightsabre and lash out at the droid! With one slash down the middle the droid splits in two as I leap over it to take out the next two by using my Jedi powers to slam them into a nearby wall.
I run across the field as I see the goal just a few more feet ahead of me. Just then 4 battle droids appear out of nowhere and fire at me! I barely bring up my lightsabre in time to block the attack.
With quick reflexes I bounce one blast off of my lightsabre and back to one of the droids taking it out. I leaped up into a tree then use the force to make a huge boulder float over the droids.
When the boulder is right over them I drop it onto them! The boulder crushes two of them but there is still one left. I position my lightsabre in my hands and throw it right at the last droid like a arrow as the sabre crashes through the droids body! I then use the force to make the lightsabre fly back into my hands as I jump from the tree and reach the goal!
As I stand there catching my breath I hear a single clapping from my far left. I dont even need to look to know who it is "Hello Skywalker. How long have you been watching me?"
Luke walks to me and says "Long enough to see you get that laser blast from the droid. You were thinking about Master Yoda again werent you? You need to put him behind you during these dangerous types of exercises. You could have been seriously injured."
I turn to him "Look Luke I have alot of respect for you but dont get involved in my personal business ok?"
There was a calm quiet in the woods as we looked at each other waiting for the other to make the first move.
I broke the silence "Luke, I'm sorry it's just that...I should have been there for him."
Luke replied "I know how you feel Zen. Not a day goes by that I dont wish I was there for my Uncle and Aunt when the stormtroopers attacked my farm. But you have to learn to let it go and move on. You were only doing what Yoda told you to do by staying in hiding. Come on you look tired. You better go get some rest."
As we walked back to the rebel base I knew what was coming from him as he opened his mouth "You know Zen I could use your..."
I stoped him "Oh come on Luke we've had this discussion before."
He continued "Zen, you and I are the only known fully trained Jedi Knights in the galaxy. It's our duty to restart the Jedi's. I could use your help to train these students."
I was going to give him the usual 'I'm a warrior not a teacher' speech but stoped and thought about it for awhile. I turned to Luke and hesitantly said "I'll think about it."
We walked a little farther when I turned and asked "So how's Madison doing?"
Luke turned to me with a smile over his face "She's doing pretty good. Still talks about how great my sister Leia is and all that."
I laugh as I comment "That girl is realy something. Madison is one of the few of your students that didnt trust me when I arrived here and actualy still doesnt."
Luke looked at me "Well when you first arrived you did attack me remember?"
I turned to him "That was a misunderstanding. The only other Jedi that I knew existed at the time was working for the Empire so I had put 2 and 2 together."
We walk farther when I turn to him "And I would have beaten you too if it wasnt for Chewie hitting me in the back of the head with his blaster."
Luke gave me a 'yeah right' look as he finished "We can talk about it later. Right now I have to check on the students. I'll see you later."
As he turned and walked away I thought "Maybe I should help him teach the Jedi students. Well I could think about it later."
Right now I needed to get some rest as I turned around and walked into the place I called home: The Rebel Base.
[Edited by Renegade on 11-02-2000 at 03:54 AM]
Here's my character:
Name: Zen
Rank: Jedi Knight
Powers or Skills: Jedi Knight. Use's a traditional green light-sabre. Skilled in many forms of hand to hand combat. The force is strong with him. His psychic abilitys are stronger then the average jedi.
Physical Description: 23 years old. 6'1. Slim but Muscular. Short dark hair. Has a big claw mark across his chest. Clean shaved. Wears the traditional jedi uniform.
Background: His parents ran away from the Empire with him when they found out he could control the force. Got the claw mark across his chest from an alien that killed his family and almost killed him. He was saved by Yoda who then raised him when he realised he could control the force. Trained under his master Yoda. Zen is not his real name but is the alias that yoda gave him to protect his identity from the Empire. He doesnt know his real name. Had been in hiding during the original trilogy under orders from yoda. Yoda told him to stay in hiding due to his fear that the empire would kill or try to turn him if they discovered he could use the force. Joined the rebels after he discovered Yoda had died. Now swears to help destroy the last of the empire's forces to avenge his master.
IC: As I run the exercise course for the third time today I think to myself how things are different since the rebels defeated the Empire. I also think of how I should have been there to help. But I had to honor Master Yoda's wishes. I think to myself "Master Yoda...how I wish I could have been there with you during your final hours. Damn the Empire for all the pain they have caused me and those I care for!!!"
Just then a blast from a droid hits me in the shoulder! I grab my arm in pain as I roll out of the way. I curse myself for not paying attention as I bring out my lightsabre and lash out at the droid! With one slash down the middle the droid splits in two as I leap over it to take out the next two by using my Jedi powers to slam them into a nearby wall.
I run across the field as I see the goal just a few more feet ahead of me. Just then 4 battle droids appear out of nowhere and fire at me! I barely bring up my lightsabre in time to block the attack.
With quick reflexes I bounce one blast off of my lightsabre and back to one of the droids taking it out. I leaped up into a tree then use the force to make a huge boulder float over the droids.
When the boulder is right over them I drop it onto them! The boulder crushes two of them but there is still one left. I position my lightsabre in my hands and throw it right at the last droid like a arrow as the sabre crashes through the droids body! I then use the force to make the lightsabre fly back into my hands as I jump from the tree and reach the goal!
As I stand there catching my breath I hear a single clapping from my far left. I dont even need to look to know who it is "Hello Skywalker. How long have you been watching me?"
Luke walks to me and says "Long enough to see you get that laser blast from the droid. You were thinking about Master Yoda again werent you? You need to put him behind you during these dangerous types of exercises. You could have been seriously injured."
I turn to him "Look Luke I have alot of respect for you but dont get involved in my personal business ok?"
There was a calm quiet in the woods as we looked at each other waiting for the other to make the first move.
I broke the silence "Luke, I'm sorry it's just that...I should have been there for him."
Luke replied "I know how you feel Zen. Not a day goes by that I dont wish I was there for my Uncle and Aunt when the stormtroopers attacked my farm. But you have to learn to let it go and move on. You were only doing what Yoda told you to do by staying in hiding. Come on you look tired. You better go get some rest."
As we walked back to the rebel base I knew what was coming from him as he opened his mouth "You know Zen I could use your..."
I stoped him "Oh come on Luke we've had this discussion before."
He continued "Zen, you and I are the only known fully trained Jedi Knights in the galaxy. It's our duty to restart the Jedi's. I could use your help to train these students."
I was going to give him the usual 'I'm a warrior not a teacher' speech but stoped and thought about it for awhile. I turned to Luke and hesitantly said "I'll think about it."
We walked a little farther when I turned and asked "So how's Madison doing?"
Luke turned to me with a smile over his face "She's doing pretty good. Still talks about how great my sister Leia is and all that."
I laugh as I comment "That girl is realy something. Madison is one of the few of your students that didnt trust me when I arrived here and actualy still doesnt."
Luke looked at me "Well when you first arrived you did attack me remember?"
I turned to him "That was a misunderstanding. The only other Jedi that I knew existed at the time was working for the Empire so I had put 2 and 2 together."
We walk farther when I turn to him "And I would have beaten you too if it wasnt for Chewie hitting me in the back of the head with his blaster."
Luke gave me a 'yeah right' look as he finished "We can talk about it later. Right now I have to check on the students. I'll see you later."
As he turned and walked away I thought "Maybe I should help him teach the Jedi students. Well I could think about it later."
Right now I needed to get some rest as I turned around and walked into the place I called home: The Rebel Base.
[Edited by Renegade on 11-02-2000 at 03:54 AM]