Spoiled stepdaughter

BlackSnake

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Jay marries Sue who is the woman of his dreams. To Jay, the bottom of Sue's feet are gorgeous. Sue has a daughter, Lilly. Lilly is a hard case spoiled by her own father and tough for Sue to handle. Sue warns Jay that Lilly comes first in her life, but also warns Jay not to go against her especially when it comes to Lilly. Right away Jay sees that he is caught between the sexy woman of his dreams and her daughter who is almost a mirror image. Jay finds out that he has to give Lilly what she want in order to enjoy time with Sue.

Jay is having a very hard time trying to get with Sue because of Lilly. He sees that his relationship with Sue is coming to a tragic end. Frustrated, Jay decides to give Lilly whatever she wants to make her happy, but he would have to make her pay in some way. His frustration with Sue leaving only their sex life between them.
 
....say Jay has Lilly to expose herself....then allow him to touch her.....then have her touch him....then give him blowjobs....steadily progressing as Lilly gets to do the things she wants to do. Sue is happy that Lilly is happy and that Jay and Lilly are getting along. Sue becomes affectionate to Jay again and their relationship and sex life gets better.

Jay feels that his relationship with Sue is great and begin to feel it wrong what he is doing with Lilly. Lilly comes to Jay and offers him a blowjob in exchange for him helping her get concert tickets. Jay refuse siting that they should not be doing it because he loves her mother. Lilly gets pissed and begins to give Sue a really hard time. Sue becomes snappy with Jay and not even wanting him to even touch her. Jay is stuck. Sue doesn't even want Lilly to go to the concert.

Jay feels he has no choice but to give into Lilly. He hates it. He goes to Lilly and tells her that she would have to agree to have sex with him "around the world" in order for him to help her. Lilly eagerly agrees. Jay has raw sex with Lilly taking her in every way that he could think of including anally. Jay then helps Lilly get to the concert without Sue knowing.

.....what do y'all think?
 
Well, two of my favourite people look to be getting together! Why don't you two write it between you as a cooperative story?
 
I'm not sure Blackie wants to do that, he says I'm much better than him, I don't think so, though I'm not him either. ;)

Course I don't know, Risia may not let us do that again. :eek:
 
I'm not sure Blackie wants to do that, he says I'm much better than him, I don't think so, though I'm not him either. ;)

Course I don't know, Risia may not let us do that again. :eek:

I would love to write this with you sweetie. I only have some basic ideas where Lilly is in the way of Jay being with Sue. Jay fears the end of his relationship with Sue, so he tries to get as much as he can. There should be more substance....let's talk :)
 
I'm of two minds on how to do Lilly.

On one hand she's shy and not forward with men besides her dad and Jay, she wouldn't ask for sex from dad because he's dad. Mom doesn't like one of her friends, because she's lesbian so doesn't like letting her go to concerts or clubs with her, so she turns to Jay and of course dresses sexy because she's going out that night when she asks. Which puts the actual sex for yes on Jay's shoulders, which you kinda said it should be.

On the other hand, Lilly is a slutty little devil, she's had her eye on Jay since mom first brought him over to the house. So she keeps going to him to ask for permission on things, wearing almost nothing draping herself all over him hoping he's going to take the hint and take her.
 
I'm of two minds on how to do Lilly.

On one hand she's shy and not forward with men besides her dad and Jay, she wouldn't ask for sex from dad because he's dad. Mom doesn't like one of her friends, because she's lesbian so doesn't like letting her go to concerts or clubs with her, so she turns to Jay and of course dresses sexy because she's going out that night when she asks. Which puts the actual sex for yes on Jay's shoulders, which you kinda said it should be.

On the other hand, Lilly is a slutty little devil, she's had her eye on Jay since mom first brought him over to the house. So she keeps going to him to ask for permission on things, wearing almost nothing draping herself all over him hoping he's going to take the hint and take her.

I like your first making Lilly willing to do anything to get what she wants....
 
Ummm, the first thought was she's asking him because mom doesn't like her friend and she likes going out with her. Most likely would be because she gets guys talking to her, she's shy but not that shy type thingy.

Hmmm, you know we could use a third, somebody to be Sue, I wonder if Snoopy would do that. :devil:

Hmmm, you know thinking on this a teensy more, perhaps we could do a sort of biographical bit on me in she's shy but doesn't say no. ;)

Though would kinda leave most of the talking to me since I'm sure you and everyone else would want to hear about the club, though I think you like that idea. :rolleyes:
 
... you know we could use a third, somebody to be Sue, I wonder if Snoopy would do that ...
I doubt I could. I have never understood women, and I'm too old to learn now; that's why the women in all my writings are so bad, except where MsLinnet and i wrote jointly and she did all the females.
 
Ummm, the first thought was she's asking him because mom doesn't like her friend and she likes going out with her. Most likely would be because she gets guys talking to her, she's shy but not that shy type thingy.

Hmmm, you know we could use a third, somebody to be Sue, I wonder if Snoopy would do that. :devil:

Hmmm, you know thinking on this a teensy more, perhaps we could do a sort of biographical bit on me in she's shy but doesn't say no. ;)

Though would kinda leave most of the talking to me since I'm sure you and everyone else would want to hear about the club, though I think you like that idea. :rolleyes:

I was also thinking that Lilly is not allow to dress sexy, call boys, have a boyfriend, go to parties where there are boys. Alone comes Jay and mom is relaxing a bit by Jay's influence. Jay is still under the rule of not going against Sue. Lilly get "No" from mama Sue, but with Jay she is manipulative but not forward sexually. Jay is caught in middle. When Lilly is happy Sue is happy which mean Jay get to have wild sexual fun with Sue. Jay is not without his faults. Sue is the beauty in Jay's eye and he likes showing her off and showing to everyone that she is in love with him.
 
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Hmmm, not bad though I can so see Lilly turning into a little sexpot to try and get Jay to say yes. Dressing all skimpy to ask, leaning into him, being suggestive. ;)
 
Hmmm, not bad though I can so see Lilly turning into a little sexpot to try and get Jay to say yes. Dressing all skimpy to ask, leaning into him, being suggestive. ;)

I do like Lilly as being the willing sex pot, but I don't want to let Jay off the hook. I see Jay as vindictive. Fucking the young sex babe is to make him feel better for having his relationship under her thumb. I feel that Jay is also resentful for not being in control of his marriage.
 
So let me get this straight, I'm playing the shy gal who isn't supposed to be dating or going near men, though is. Not like there would be another reason why a gal would get a no you can't do that from a mom who let's her do whatever. ;)
 
So let me get this straight, I'm playing the shy gal who isn't supposed to be dating or going near men, though is. Not like there would be another reason why a gal would get a no you can't do that from a mom who let's her do whatever. ;)

...I'm sorry, but the mom doesn't allow her to do whatever. If the mom fights with the daughter then Jay doesn't get to enjoy mom. Complicated?
 
Dang blacky you so gotta see a doctor about that growth on your face. :eek:

I beleive something got lost in translation, my bad though wasn't that just the greatest movie. ;):eek:

Anyway I gotcha she gets everything she wants but isn't allowed to date. I am so seeing a hentai addict in the making here, cause dang not getting sex and wanting sex is so going to make you look somewhere for satisfaction. I've not had sex for extended periods before. :(

Go with me on this, the american sex games are so geared toward men, most are a female body in positions with a dildo cause you don't even see another body, doesn't do much for me anyway. The hentai games on the other hand have a story, they aren't just sex, I like them. ;)

This is also a great place to get no answers, say wants to go get a new one let's slip the name and mom recognizes and says no so turns to Jay. Jay says no and of course one pissed off horny gal who is tired of the games she has to get rid of the urge.
 
Dang blacky you so gotta see a doctor about that growth on your face. :eek:

I beleive something got lost in translation, my bad though wasn't that just the greatest movie. ;):eek:

Anyway I gotcha she gets everything she wants but isn't allowed to date. I am so seeing a hentai addict in the making here, cause dang not getting sex and wanting sex is so going to make you look somewhere for satisfaction. I've not had sex for extended periods before. :(

Go with me on this, the american sex games are so geared toward men, most are a female body in positions with a dildo cause you don't even see another body, doesn't do much for me anyway. The hentai games on the other hand have a story, they aren't just sex, I like them. ;)

This is also a great place to get no answers, say wants to go get a new one let's slip the name and mom recognizes and says no so turns to Jay. Jay says no and of course one pissed off horny gal who is tired of the games she has to get rid of the urge.

exactly....pissed off horny gal makes everyone's life a living hell until Jay figures out a way to tame the beast... ;)
 
Oh well fine just do that. :D

Now about that growth on your face, I think it's getting bigger you really gotta go see a doctor. :eek::eek::p
 
Much better though that better be a waterfall or your floating your way to Brazil or the South Pole now. :eek:
 
Much better though that better be a waterfall or your floating your way to Brazil or the South Pole now. :eek:

Yes, it's a waterfall....I've been trying to get out more to see and experience things instead of just thinking about it. Both trips to the North Ga and NC mountains took under 2 hrs. I keep forgetting that the Atlanta Metro area is actually in the northern part of the state. I burned hardly no gas at all.....oops rambling :D
 
Eeeeeeewwwwwwww NC, you shouldn't go there, they are supposed to be southerners but got nabbed up by the north so now they are all confused and weird. :eek:
 
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