MiddleAgedMan
Preoccupied writer
- Joined
- Sep 29, 2015
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I am just starting a new story arc, one I have plans for as a long story that evolves, in part, based on the feedback I get. I have many plans and events planned out, some conflicting, so I'll have to choose. That is not my question though, it's only backdrop.
My question is this: the main story line follows a young man with powers of mind control and his journey of discovery. The story is mainly Mind Control, with elements of exhibitionism/voyeurism, group sex, anal, bdsm, nonconsent and maybe more in time. The main supporting actor is his uncle, acting as both a teacher and moral compass. The thing is, I want to add his uncle's story, but mainly as a bdsm-oriented tangent.
My gut feeling is to make it as a separate series as a spin-off, leaving me free to write shorter, more action packed chapters, but that means wasting a lot of time explaining events and mechanics, or on the flip side, not explaining it and telling the readers to go read my main story first. (Arrogant, I know...)
The alternative is to instead introduce the uncle as a second POV in the main arc, but then I'm afraid there will be too much weird stuff for vanilla readers who just want simple mind control, as if there is such a thing...
Thoughts? Comments? Suggestions?
My question is this: the main story line follows a young man with powers of mind control and his journey of discovery. The story is mainly Mind Control, with elements of exhibitionism/voyeurism, group sex, anal, bdsm, nonconsent and maybe more in time. The main supporting actor is his uncle, acting as both a teacher and moral compass. The thing is, I want to add his uncle's story, but mainly as a bdsm-oriented tangent.
My gut feeling is to make it as a separate series as a spin-off, leaving me free to write shorter, more action packed chapters, but that means wasting a lot of time explaining events and mechanics, or on the flip side, not explaining it and telling the readers to go read my main story first. (Arrogant, I know...)
The alternative is to instead introduce the uncle as a second POV in the main arc, but then I'm afraid there will be too much weird stuff for vanilla readers who just want simple mind control, as if there is such a thing...
Thoughts? Comments? Suggestions?