sperm bank night deposit gloryhole

[Hypoxia]

I don't know if this setup has been used but it jumped at me as I drove to town today.

Anyway, I have a thang about visualizing story endings, often with old single-panel cartoons. Such was the inspiration for Right Under His Eyes. I'm thinking of a couple of morbid Rodriguez cartoons. In one, the morgue attendant hands the widow "his estate": a paper bag with an empty booze bottle. In another, the morgue drawer is rolled out; the sleazy little hubby exclaims, "Yesireee, that's my wife!" Not real sexy, but hey!

What I see now is a classic cartoon showing a bank's night-deposit window. But it's a sperm bank and the guy is zipping-up as he walks away. Can that be the final image in a story?

So here's a mob-sponsored "sperm bank" that's actually a prostitution front. Outside the office are a line of booths for anonymous "night deposits". These are actually gloryholes, with slots at varied heights for variously-tall 'clients'. Slide -in bills of various denominations for your desired donation service: US$20 for a hand job, more for an actual mouth or pussy or anus. Flash a badge and it's free.

Does that guy walking away in the final frame have a badge on his belt?

 

[sirhugs]

So it's a cliffhanger to the sequel? Does the cop arrest the whole shebang, or do the photos incriminate him too much?

 

[Hypoxia]

So it's a cliffhanger to the sequel? Does the cop arrest the whole shebang, or do the photos incriminate him too much?

Why bust them? He gets all the freebies he wants. No, the sequel might have a busload of male Japanese tourists descending on the facility at night. Then other bus tours. It's a regular stop on the international sex-tourism circuit. Local law doesn't mind because 1) they still get freebies and maybe a cut of the proceeds and 2) it keeps the sex traffic off the street and confined to that one location.

But one cop learns his wife / GF / mother / daughter / sister is on the other side. Or worse yet, his father / brother / son. Does he stick to the program, or go rogue, or what?

 

[Strangebuddy]

A darker version could be that some of the girls get a huge bonus if they're willing to get pregnant. Now why would the mob do that? Blackmail.

So our cop starts getting a guilty conscience, especially when the mob's non-prostitution activities start flaring up so he figures it's time to squeal. Mob calls him the next day to tell him it would be best to reconsider. When he asks why, the guy on the other end tells him to go see his sister.

Turns out sis is pregnant. Mob calls his cell and reminds him of all the times he went without a condom and never bothered to look into what girls were on the other side. Sis never needs to know her own brother knocked her up and they'll make sure the kid has a good start...but he keeps his mouth shut or else.

Course a second twist could occur in that his sister isn't pregnant with his baby though she did work there for a bit. After all, he doesn't want her to know so it's not like he's going to grill her about it.

Lighter version could be that the place operates legitimately during the day and one of the employees forgets something so she heads back at night to get it. She then sees all the girls lined up and is shocked as she figures out what's going on.

Then the woman running the place for the mob ushers her into a booth telling her that since she's new she only needs to get 500 before she leaves for the night. The first cock comes in and the guy asks for a handjob...scared she complies but by the third guy she's enjoying it and sees that the other girls are actually quite nice. Then someone asks to look at her ass and she sees the request is anal. She loves it and practically collapses foron the dirtiness of all of it. By the time the real new girl shows up, the sperm bank employee is well fucked and has collected over $2,000 with 3 hours left.

She still wants to work her regular job though so by day she's payibg men for their sperm while by night she's getting paid for it.