Glory Hole (sci-fi horror/possible comedy)

[Brandnewbuddy]

So before anyone asks: yes, I have seen the movie “Glorious” which is indeed a horror film about an eldritch being (voiced by JK Simmons) on the other side of a glory hole.

For the idea: highway town has a bit of a reputation. Not much to do for the visiting truckers and adult locals but quite a few stalls and “adult spas” have glory holes.

It’s not that uncommon for a guy on his 18th birthday to get his first blowjob at an old barn who’s been changed into a club and maybe even pop their cherry if they’re particularly lucky. At the same time, a number of women and curious guys also get to give some lip service or even take a pounding at glory hole with the benefit of anonymity.

Of course thing is, you never know who specifically is on the other side:

1. While there are quite a few bathrooms with holes available, the place to go in town is an old barn. Part of the excitement of that place is that there’s only limited privacy for the one’s putting their cocks in the holes, adding a bit of a voyeur/exhibition element. On the other side the person has full anonymity, sure you can see someone go in hut you’re never sure when they leave or which hole they are at.

So one night a guy goes to the barn, whips his dick out and then starts humping. The person on the other end feels weird but in a good way. He finishes shooting a massive load…but when he tries to pull back, whoever is on the other side grabs hold and won’t let him go. The person begins stimulating him again and he gets hard but their methods become even stranger. He comes again and tries to pull away but once again, the person won’t release him.

He hears the guy next to him he is having the same problem, soon they hear other guys and the truth dawns on them: whatever they are fucking, it’s not multiple people but one entity and it’s refusing to release them.

2. Group of women get together and decide to visit the barn. They have a couple drinks and get their courage up and go in to the private area. Now there are sections. There’s section where there’s only enough room to kneel but there is another section where you have enough room to turn around if you want to take a pounding.

Then there’s a final section where only one or two people are allowed. That one actually has you lay down and stick your bottom half out. It’s rarely used but at least one of the women have decided they are going to use it by the end of the night.

Women enjoy their time, stifling giggles as they realize who some of the people are on the other side. A couple of them even get frisky with each other while pleasuring folk and to their surprise they even get to eat some pussy…but things get strange. While they are in there they notice the bar gets quiet. The people on the other side also get less communicative and what they start putting through the holes look weirder and weirder until the ladies are wondering if someone is just playing a prank and shoving sex toys through the holes…but they feel quite alive and when the ladies think that it’s time to leave, the strange genitals start to split and grow into tentacles.

Of course the bravest of them has just put her legs in the stirrups and stuck her bottom out for whoever wants it and as she listens to tunes on her earbuds, she feels something that has the flexibility of a tongue but is much girthier exploring her thighs as what feels like claws are running over her ass.

3. Guy is going to get his first blowjob at one of the gloryholes around town when he sees a circus being set up. He stops to ask about it but then spies a group of clowns and runs off.

He gets to his stop and goes into a stall where to his delight he hears a very feminine voice (while he would prefer no talking the woman on the other end sounds cute and once she starts going at it, he’s in heaven). He finishes and the woman asks if he’d like to have some more fun and texts him a pic of her bare bottom, which based on the sound, she is now slapping against the side of the hole.

Guy doesn’t even wait to ask how she got his number and eagerly fucks her. Though to his surprise, he hears…squeaking? Right as he’s about to finish, she hops off and takes him in her mouth and it feels even better than before. He hears some gagging and then realizes she’s deepthroating him..only he didn’t know his dick could go that far.

He then gets a text on his phone and it sends him to a live stream…which shows a clown deepthroating someone. He tries to click off but as the clown finishes, putting her nose against the stall, he hear the honk of a rubber nose going off. He tries to pull out but then gets stopped. Looking at the vid he sees that somehow the clown has lengthened his cock and twisted it into a sword like a balloon, with the “hilt” preventing him from pulling it back out.

She then deepthroats him again and begins using a ventriloquist dummy to explain that she wants MC to get over his fear of clowns and learn that they’re there to make sure everyone has a fun time. As he sees his cock come back out, this time as a pretzel, he hears a knock on the stall door and two more clowns slide in with him.

Insert cream pie jokes, rubber chickens, what have you.

 

[AlinaX]

I don't get the clown thing, but the others have potential.

 

[33RPMVinylPants]

I like 1 and 2 combined as an erotic horror combo.

Every time someone uses a hole, things get a little bit wierder... And it all started when that mysterious stranger stopped in for a quickie.

Basically write it as a contagion. Every time someone uses a hole (from either side), they become less and less human - and pass on the corruption to the person on the other side.

Dicks become tentacles. Mouths gush with intoxicating secretions. Sensations warp and fray, and people start sliding into this unreality of flesh and pleasure.

Before too long, that curious 18-year-old has devolved into a tentacle-dicked, tentacle-fingered insatiable lust machine, and the bored housewife who goes to recapture her lost youth is nothing more than a shapeless mass of lips, sucking at hole in the wall at once.

Some real Lovecraft shit.

 

[WCSGarland]

I like 1 and 2 combined as an erotic horror combo.

Every time someone uses a hole, things get a little bit wierder... And it all started when that mysterious stranger stopped in for a quickie.

Basically write it as a contagion. Every time someone uses a hole (from either side), they become less and less human - and pass on the corruption to the person on the other side.

Dicks become tentacles. Mouths gush with intoxicating secretions. Sensations warp and fray, and people start sliding into this unreality of flesh and pleasure.

Before too long, that curious 18-year-old has devolved into a tentacle-dicked, tentacle-fingered insatiable lust machine, and the bored housewife who goes to recapture her lost youth is nothing more than a shapeless mass of lips, sucking at hole in the wall at once.

Some real Lovecraft shit.

I'm in awe of your twisted imagination.

 

[33RPMVinylPants]

I'm in awe of your twisted imagination.

There's a story I've had percolating for a while where a gardener finds a dick growing in among the asparagus. It haunts her dreams until she can't resist the temptation to mount it. The neighbors see her and feel compelled to join in. Soon the whole neighborhood has joined in a big mindless orgy. They become twisted caricatures of fertility, melting together in a mass of rutting flesh. All who come near fall victim to the overpowering temptation to have just a taste.

The idea here seemed to follow in the same vein.

I'm not a good enough writer yet to make it happen, but it's floating around in my 'maybe someday' pile.

 

[WCSGarland]

There's a story I've had percolating for a while where a gardener finds a dick growing in among the asparagus. It haunts her dreams until she can't resist the temptation to mount it. The neighbors see her and feel compelled to join in. Soon the whole neighborhood has joined in a big mindless orgy. They become twisted caricatures of fertility, melting together in a mass of rutting flesh. All who come near fall victim to the overpowering temptation to have just a taste.

The idea here seemed to follow in the same vein.

I'm not a good enough writer yet to make it happen, but it's floating around in my 'maybe someday' pile.

I'll read it if you ever write it.

 

[lovecraft68]

There's a site on You tube called Alter that does indy horror shorts.

Go to it and search "Gwilliam"

It's short, but just one of those "WTF did I just watch" Let's say it ties into this idea.

 

[ericrodman101]

I like the whole idea of this sort of Twin Peaks subversion of reality - everything on one side is normal and peachy smalltown stuff and on the otherside is darker, more challenging, threatening. The 18 year old developing a tentacled penis, the deepthroating beyond what is physically possible, the normal folks orgy in the field. Does everyone remember what's happened? Are the tentacles there all the time or only when he's aroused?