Sophie Harper

DanM407

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I'm looking forward to more Sophie Harper stories by The_Shadow_Rising. I'm really looking forward to seeing her getting fucked on her wedding day. I'd like to see her in white stockings and her wedding dress getting it from behind separately from Ben and her father-in-law.

How would you like to see it happen at her wedding?
 
Can't say I'm losing sleep over it, no.

Sounds like a lovely story, though.
 
What a dickweed is this author. I read his updates on his profile from time to time and this guy's head really is too big for its own good. Maybe instead of writing a 100.000 updates maybe finish the damn story lol.
 
Sophie's Wedding

First of all fuck that last dude.

Secondly, I would also like to see Sophie get banged at her wedding. But it would need to be something different not just a rehashing of old favorites or a 'best of' story. Maybe the bridesmaids can be involved. They could have boyfriends too. Haven't had too many FFM scenes.
 
That's nice of you to say Fusion. I partially agree that I miss the shorter stories, but there's something to be said for the depth with which Shadow delved into the psychology of the characters in HP. I think people need to appreciate how frustrating writing can be. That said, I think it'd be nice to see Shadow reconnect with some good ol' fashioned big tits, big dick, fucking, sucking and cumming.
 
Just to reply. You are right about the need to write shorter stories; which I have honestly said I am planning on doing after this one again. So absolutely true. I like the longer stories as they are different - and I like to write different things - but I miss the shorter ones myself, so after this one it will be those for a long while.

As for arrogance; I have always said I am firstly. Secondly, the 'I don't give a fuck' has never been added to any comment about anything, it is an expression of feeling and a thought about how people don't like my stories as cheating women and my way of saying that I will write as I please. As noted, I am arrogant, yes. I also know that I don't get everything perfect, and I know that I do well in the genre I write in. I also know that I am polite to everyone who is the same to me. As for the story ideas; I ask for them as I'm interested, but I say don't expect me to write them as (a) I don't want to get people's hopes up, and (b) I could never possibly write them all that are sent. Those who have spoken to me know I speak the truth here. Now, that said, I am flawed, but then the only one I am writing for is myself.

Finally, you are right about how long the story has taken, but I thought I have been very clear about this; I have a life, and that dictates when and how much I can write, and my work life isn't static (sometimes I have a lot and sometimes I don't) and I do have other things to do. Don't like it, there's not much I can do. As always, I do the best I can; not good enough for you, feel free not to wait or write your own stories, I can only do what I can, as Dantes understands as a writer.

The ideas on here look good, very interested in them.
 
You know what I would like to read?

1. A girl that starts crying during the sex. She loves her boyfriend but at the same time she's loving it so much that all those emotions boil over and she has a good sob. The guy keeps plowing her of course during this. "What's wrong baby?" *SLAM SLAM SLAM*

2. A young daughter that catches her Dad doing then cheating girlfriend/wife/fiance. She's shocked at the idea but then realizes how good it all looks and she ends up being okay with it. Maybe the cheating ... even sees her and their eyes communicate the satisfaction that she's getting.
 
I personally don't mind the longer story structure. As long as it builds and doesn't drag, there isn't a problem. The sex scenes are so potent not just because of how they are written but what came before it. All the emotions and events that led to it. Without it, reading a sex scene loses so much. You might as well just go watch porn at that point.
 
... About a month and a half ago, learning that he was writing a new story, I was excited! Then an endless series of updates come along where he angrily castigates his fans, concluding with the addendum "I DO NOT GIVE A FUCK (...) I'M A FUCKING INSTITUTION" every time. He says he doesn't want to be arrogant, but pontificates for nearly 1700 words about how he's been writing all day every day (though the progress bar hasn't moved in weeks). Further, he solicits story ideas, but conjectures that noone should expect any of their ideas to be considered.

"A FUCKING INSTITUTION" I had never heard of in six years of avid reading on Literotica until this thread. Sorry, The_shadow_rising, there are "Institutions" at Literotica, but you aren't one of them. IMHO, naturally.
 
Id like to see billy turn up to get what he wanted at the club on the morning of the wedding, getting off on the fact Sophie is walking up the aisle full of the grooms brothers sperm

Then Josh's dad gets his hands on her at the wedding breakfast as she looks just too hot in a wedding dress for him to resist
 
Would definitely like to see this story continued. Multiple guys may be interesting, but there is opportunities before the wedding breakfast, before the ceremony, and before/during/after the reception. Maybe even in the honeymoon suite with the groom entertaining family/guests and one or two slip to the bedroom for some private time with the bride. :)
 
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