BlackSnake
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I am working on this story idea, and I was wondering if anyone could help me with the plot.
The son, Scotty has been for all of his existance a quiet boy. He has never gotten in trouble in school, always made good grades, and never was caught using obscene language.
To his parents, Jill and Rayford, Scotty was a model child. Never needed to be asked twice to do any chore, was helpful around the house, never complained about diner, never hung out with the wrong groups of kids. He didn't drink, smoke, or do any drugs.
Scotty was also a loner and never dated. He did have his own car, which he bought with the money he made working. He made his father proud buy not allowing his father to purchase the car for him.
Rayford was a well-to-do self made man. His wealth came from the many long hours he spent working. He did however set aside one day aweek to be with his wife and son.
Jill was a very well built woman. She married Rayford for security....well, his money. She didn't mind the fact she had no education or job. Her looks was all she needed and it landed her a very wealthy man.
It was Scotty's 18th birthday, and he had come home early from school because of his work study program. For the first time since he could remember there wasn't a birthday cake on the kitchen counter, nor a present from his mother. His father always without fail left an envelop with money in it for him, a generous amount.
For the first time in his life he was actually pissed off at his mother. He figured out months earlier that his mother was having an affair. He kept quiet about it, not even letting his mother know that he was aware of it. He knew that his father would never stand for it, and a devorce would be terrible for his mother.
Jill had been absent minded about things since her affair began. Leaving things that belonged to her lover laying around the house. Scotty had even found his mother's lover's wallet on the sofa. Scotty had been deligent in cleaning up the signs of the affair to keep his father from finding out.
Of all the things that his mother had forgotten over the past months, his birthday was the one thing that he never would have expected her to forget.
Scotty decided that it was time for him to stand up and take action. He didn't like the idea of another man touching the woman who was his whole life and his dreams. From the first time he saw her naked, he began desiring her sexually, even though he was careful to keep his thoughts to himself. His mother's affair actually made his a little jealuous.
The son, Scotty has been for all of his existance a quiet boy. He has never gotten in trouble in school, always made good grades, and never was caught using obscene language.
To his parents, Jill and Rayford, Scotty was a model child. Never needed to be asked twice to do any chore, was helpful around the house, never complained about diner, never hung out with the wrong groups of kids. He didn't drink, smoke, or do any drugs.
Scotty was also a loner and never dated. He did have his own car, which he bought with the money he made working. He made his father proud buy not allowing his father to purchase the car for him.
Rayford was a well-to-do self made man. His wealth came from the many long hours he spent working. He did however set aside one day aweek to be with his wife and son.
Jill was a very well built woman. She married Rayford for security....well, his money. She didn't mind the fact she had no education or job. Her looks was all she needed and it landed her a very wealthy man.
It was Scotty's 18th birthday, and he had come home early from school because of his work study program. For the first time since he could remember there wasn't a birthday cake on the kitchen counter, nor a present from his mother. His father always without fail left an envelop with money in it for him, a generous amount.
For the first time in his life he was actually pissed off at his mother. He figured out months earlier that his mother was having an affair. He kept quiet about it, not even letting his mother know that he was aware of it. He knew that his father would never stand for it, and a devorce would be terrible for his mother.
Jill had been absent minded about things since her affair began. Leaving things that belonged to her lover laying around the house. Scotty had even found his mother's lover's wallet on the sofa. Scotty had been deligent in cleaning up the signs of the affair to keep his father from finding out.
Of all the things that his mother had forgotten over the past months, his birthday was the one thing that he never would have expected her to forget.
Scotty decided that it was time for him to stand up and take action. He didn't like the idea of another man touching the woman who was his whole life and his dreams. From the first time he saw her naked, he began desiring her sexually, even though he was careful to keep his thoughts to himself. His mother's affair actually made his a little jealuous.
