sometimes i feel...

[Gave Up]

i just started writing lyrics recently and am working on a few songs for an album i have been working on for a bit. thoughts?

sometimes i feel

convultions, reflections between my eyes
compultions objections to all your lies
repultions misdirections on your side
how it got passed me i don't know why

decieve me (what if what you wanted wasn't mean't to stay)
decieve me (all you whores have your price you pay)

deceptions, collections of your disease
conceptions, erections dropping to my knees
complications, castrations always begging please
sometimes i feel i can't ever be fully free

decieve me (what if who you are isn't real at all)
decieve me (one of these days everything you know will fall)

remember that time
we created something new
murder what it was
can't believe i was inside you

 

[eagleyez]

Sometimes I Feel...

...like a motherless child.

 

[WickedEve]

...like a motherless child.

I was doing my best not to write "... like a nut. sometimes I don't."

Sorry, I can't give you any constructive feedback, GU. I'm not good with lyrics.
Actually, I'm not good with poetry anymore either. I'm into photography now. I have a lovely pic of my thumb.


Hi, ee.

 

[eagleyez]

I was doing my best not to write "... like a nut. sometimes I don't."

Sorry, I can't give you any constructive feedback, GU. I'm not good with lyrics.
Actually, I'm not good with poetry anymore either. I'm into photography now. I have a lovely pic of my thumb.


Hi, ee.

And such a thumb it is, print and all...

Hello and all affection Eve.