someone please help with this story

[hotchiksmalwily]

hi, I have recently been writing a cuckold story. I am not the greatest writer and would like a VE to read over my work and make the appropriate changes, also add bit if needed.

If you read and feel you can do way better please let me know and yu may use the story. Please understand this is a story for me and my fiancee, we are still thinking about the whole cuckold thing She has not seen the stroy and I am hoping to stumble accross it or a similar one where we can change names and pretend its our situation:0

I have an email and will provide once someone decides to help, thanks

 

[Roleplay_Mom]

PM sent.

 

[tustin92614]

Here is a link to a cuckold-lite story that published. Not my best work, but it was a fun theme for me
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=441633

I sumitted a chapter 2 for it, that I think is better. It should publish in the next day or so. If you'd like it sooner, just PM me your email

Good luck with the story.