Some of my story ideas

[plover111]

ok well i was sitting around today and i thought of two stories that i might write but before i do i want to know what you guys would think of them.

#1 - a guy has this huge crush on a real hot girl from his college, he is too shy to talk to her so he decides to grab her in the hall and rape her [sensual rape(she gets turned on and they do it)]

#2 - A young 18 yr.old boy develops a watch like device to stop time and goes on a wild sex trip making love to many different girls in many different places.

So give me some feedback and i might decide to write these

 

[Whisky7up]

#2 - A young 18 yr.old boy develops a watch like device to stop time and goes on a wild sex trip making love to many different girls in many different places./QUOTE]



Have you read The Fermata?

 

[plover111]

nope i haven't read it could you post a link to it please?

 

[LadyCibelle]

nope i haven't read it could you post a link to it please?

It's a book!! You know the thing made from paper, has words in it, famous author? A book!

The Fermata

 

[thegibe]

#1 - a guy has this huge crush on a real hot girl from his college, he is too shy to talk to her so he decides to grab her in the hall and rape her [sensual rape(she gets turned on and they do it)]

It's not really believable. If he's too shy to even talk to her, how could he work up the courage to rape her?

 

[plover111]

well that's why it's a fantasy, it doesn't have to be totally real, just like my 2nd idea.

 

[Salaczar34567]

#2!!!

That sounds the best story ever...u should definatly go with that i mean what guy wouldnt want to stop time and go a sex-capade...seriously story #2 sounds hot...let me know when its done i can't wait to read it

 

[plover111]

ok well i wrote chapter one (or girl one ] of the second story here's the link to it

https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=316645

 

[Salaczar34567]

plover has some real serious talent for writing this stuff...i wish i had a watch that allowed me to do what the main character in her story does...good work

 

[plover111]

thanks

in HIS story

 

[Texguy84]

ok well i was sitting around today and i thought of two stories that i might write but before i do i want to know what you guys would think of them.

#1 - a guy has this huge crush on a real hot girl from his college, he is too shy to talk to her so he decides to grab her in the hall and rape her [sensual rape(she gets turned on and they do it)]

#2 - A young 18 yr.old boy develops a watch like device to stop time and goes on a wild sex trip making love to many different girls in many different places.

So give me some feedback and i might decide to write these

#1 - as someone mentioned before, if he can't work up the nerve to talk to her, I hardly see him working up the nerve to rape her (sensual or otherwise). OTOH, you could have the story take place in a fantasy of his, though I'm not sure how difficult it would be to pull that off well.

#2 - Ever see Clockstoppers? I haven't, but I recall it has something to do with a watch that stops time. Would certainly love to have one of those for myself

 

[plover111]

that;s initially where i got the idea from, i just "spiced" up the storyline