Some ideas I'm rolling around

Sweat_pea

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Well firstly, I'm working to get my very first writing on Literotica, "Wet Suck -Practice makes perfect." polished up by a couple of editors who are helping me to learn just how online writing works and rolling around some ideas for reworking it to make it into more of what I'm going for with it. When that's finished and published here are a couple of ideas I was throwing around in my head.

First I was thinking of a sequel to Wet suck, where the wife in the story is reunited with her wayward soul mate who is a Marine in Iraq, set after the first story in which the question comes up (or at least that's what I working towards) whether this latex toy is connecting "Cynthia" to "Brian" or if she is simply loosing grip on reality out of heart ache and loneliness.

That's my first idea for a new one.

The second is a historical romance/erotica story set in pagan Celtic Ireland, though I have also considered a story of lovers in Gaul set at the time the continent was falling to the Roman Empire. I am a bit of a history buff and can imagine the romance bursting out of any situation so I think I could pull either off with out a hitch by I'm leaning towards Ireland.

Now, the idea is that it's Ireland around the time the Spanish and French Celts are fleeing the continent, so it is well before the coming of Patrick, though I think that would be a good era to write about too, definitely allot of historical and mythological drama to play with there.

The lovers in the story would be a man and a woman who are members of two different Tuath or tribes/clans who are bitter rivals. Their relationship later to be discovered by both sides sparks battles between the Irish tribes as well as with the lovers via their loyalties to their families, people, and traditions.

That's about all I have for now on romance and erotica but as far as strict smut (lol) I have the Wet suck idea, and a rough draft of my first attempt called 'Uncle Toby' for you really naughty ones. It's a story about an ex bf I had, he wasn't really my Uncle, but loved it when I called him that lol... Men. :rolleyes:

I have this oral sex fetish which I've had since I discovered Popsicle sticks. Now, however it is quite a bit more defined. I was quite famous for my skills all through school and now as a writer (or at least an aspiring one) it is one of my favorite subjects to write on and my husband just adores helping me with my research. (lol).

So on the smut side, I was thinking of something along the lines of a sloppy messy blowjob for some mature neighbor by the sweet innocent girl next door? Or maybe someone like one of the men have a hotter plot idea? I'm always open to possibilities.

Sweetpea was here!
 
You sound like a very thoughtful, serious writer.

What the fuck is wrong with you? Have you read the crap on this site? Especially the crap that I publish? Ye Gods, just write it and post it already!! They'll lap it up like free beer at happy hour!!

Good stuff is certainly good, and you should continue to try to write it. But even trash is worth a read. Toss up your chaff, and work on the wheat when you have time. I'll read it!.......Carney
 
You sound like a very thoughtful, serious writer.

What the fuck is wrong with you? Have you read the crap on this site? Especially the crap that I publish? Ye Gods, just write it and post it already!! They'll lap it up like free beer at happy hour!!

Good stuff is certainly good, and you should continue to try to write it. But even trash is worth a read. Toss up your chaff, and work on the wheat when you have time. I'll read it!.......Carney

Well ty! :rose:

I don't think it'll be trash, but probably more of interest to those who have an interest in Celtic/Pagan history or even just history in general. And I try to make a very in depth love scene so the naughty boys might want to skip strait to the good parts lol
 
mmmm...Rolling Around is very sexy

oh, sorry... that's not the idea?

Musta got distracted by Carney's talk of free beer...

I'm all for the smut story, and that might be your biggest audience...
 
mmmm...Rolling Around is very sexy

oh, sorry... that's not the idea?

Musta got distracted by Carney's talk of free beer...

I'm all for the smut story, and that might be your biggest audience...

LoL, I agree on all counts. I have spent nearly all night watching porn while my husband slept. Lets just say Im in the mood for some nasty lit. lol.
 
LoL, I agree on all counts. I have spent nearly all night watching porn while my husband slept. Lets just say Im in the mood for some nasty lit. lol.

So how does the hottie corner the older neighbour?
Is he married?
Do they know each other?
Has he been watching her?
Please include lots of detail of how he feels in her mouth...
 
... Please include lots of detail of how he feels in her mouth...
When he feels in her mouth he finds a tongue and a lot of teeth. Unfortunately she objected to him feeling in her mouth as if she were a horse he was considering buying, so she shut her mouth, hard, and now they call him "One Hand Luke".
 
When he feels in her mouth he finds a tongue and a lot of teeth. Unfortunately she objected to him feeling in her mouth as if she were a horse he was considering buying, so she shut her mouth, hard, and now they call him "One Hand Luke".

but the ladies love that stump action !;)
 
Ways that Writing Erotic Fiction is Like Giving a Blowjob

1. You won't get better at it by thinking about it.
2. Your first time won't be that great but...
2a. Most likely, your audience won't really mind.
3. You get better by practice and experimentation.
4. Anyone who doesn't appreciate it should go fuck themselves.
5. I will love you for it.
6. If it doesn't have a happy ending, there better be a damn good reason.
7. Enthusiasm goes a long long way towards making up for sloppy technique.
8. You can go a lot deeper if you relax.
9. You can stick your finger up everyone's ass, but not everyone will like it.
10. The very best is done to please yourself.
 
So how does the hottie corner the older neighbour?

LoL, hmm, well in my experience all a girl needs to "corner" her neighbor is a skimpy bikini and a lot of oil lol. But I was thinking I'd make her a "valley girl" type. As in one of those ritzy - ditsy, "Like totally -- Like, oh ma gawd kay?" girls, lol real rich bitch type. You know the type right? Like maybe a cross between Alicia Siverstone's characters in Clueless and the Crush, maybe the babysitter only 18 of course, or maybe just not mention age at all, just insinuate and let the reader decide for themselves. With her neighbor being in his 30s or 40s. The dirty old man type (always the best flavor), maybe even the mature type, you know - really give it that filthy lil whore/dirty old pervert flavor. ;)


Is he married?

Do they know each other?

Yes and yes lol. Personally I don't care for the idea of cheating and by the time I'm done with the story my husband will probably be on the couch, but I have to admit that as long as it's fantasy/fiction/made up, the cheating husband scenario does give it more of a dirty "in the heat of the moment" kind of feel.

Married or know each other? I guess if I wanted to step it up a notch or two, she could be cheating on a bf and him on his wife and her mother by making him the step dad? :eek:

I know you naughty old guys love that scenario. lol

Has he been watching her?

Peeping tom step daddy? lol

Please include lots of detail of how he feels in her mouth...

I am very careful not to leave out the finer points of sucking cock lol. Ask my editors. :kiss:
 
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"or maybe just not mention age at all, just insinuate and let the reader decide for themselves"

hmmm... might not get past the moderators. I had a story rejected for "possibly underage", that included a mention of the gal being "barely legal". Added another "eighteen" and another and got approved...
 
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