I appreciate the feedback from my first submission: https://literotica.com/s/between-the-sheets-4
Just wanted to make a clarification. One person was under the impression that Kelli was my roommate's girlfriend. She was not. She was just, "one of the guys," and wasn't attached to anyone in particular.
I should have done a better job at indentifying that, and I'll keep it in mind for future works. Thank you all for your constructive feedback, I'll try to make a new story/submission every two weeks or so.
Just wanted to make a clarification. One person was under the impression that Kelli was my roommate's girlfriend. She was not. She was just, "one of the guys," and wasn't attached to anyone in particular.
I should have done a better job at indentifying that, and I'll keep it in mind for future works. Thank you all for your constructive feedback, I'll try to make a new story/submission every two weeks or so.