So this idea ...

[Rob_Royale]

I'm 5300 words into this and the story has taken on a life of its own. I sure hope the readers are in the mood for slow burn as I'm taking my time getting to the sexy parts. After taking another hard look at my plans, I'm nixing the ersatz mother/son relationship though it could be open to that interpretation. So, it will just be a gentle femdom cougar/cub story, and I'll put it in Mature.

 

[Djmac1031]

And if he starts calling her mom and it starts feeling a little more taboo?

I wrote a story awhile back called "Mommy" For Hire, and while the MMC did indeed call the character Mommy often, it was clearly established that it wasn't incest, merely role playing and so went in Fetish.

Mature seems better for what you're doing and I personally think the "Mommy" thing wouldn't affect that choice as again you're clearly establishing they're not related.

Still i suppose a tag to warn people who get squicky about that kinda thing might be appropriate.

 

[dirk2024]

I'm 5300 words into this and the story has taken on a life of its own. I sure hope the readers are in the mood for slow burn as I'm taking my time getting to the sexy parts. After taking another hard look at my plans, I'm nixing the ersatz mother/son relationship though it could be open to that interpretation. So, it will just be a gentle femdom cougar/cub story, and I'll put it in Mature.

I'm looking forward to it.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I wrote a story awhile back called "Mommy" For Hire, and while the MMC did indeed call the character Mommy often, it was clearly established that it wasn't incest, merely role playing and so went in Fetish.

Mature seems better for what you're doing and I personally think the "Mommy" thing wouldn't affect that choice as again you're clearly establishing they're not related.

Still i suppose a tag to warn people who get squicky about that kinda thing might be appropriate.

I'm establishing a gentle sub/dom relationship as she is both his employer and his nurse, as on top of his sleep issues, he comes down with a wicked flu right after moving into her home. So, she's in an immediate position of authority and as the MMC is a veteran, obeying authority is sort of part of who he is at this point. So, I'll be using ma'am as her title and she's fond of calling him 'sweetie' and 'hun', affectionate terms that reinforce her caregiver side of the relationship.

I've also created a physical power imbalance is he's about 5'8" and rather lean and she is 6' with a robust figure.

So far, it's one of those rare stories for me, where I just have an idea and not much of a plan and I'm pantsing a lot of it. It's really fleshed out the setting and his purpose in her home.

 

[Djmac1031]

I'm establishing a gentle sub/dom relationship as she is both his employer and his nurse, as on top of his sleep issues, he comes down with a wicked flu right after moving into her home. So, she's in an immediate position of authority and as the MMC is a veteran, obeying authority is sort of part of who he is at this point. So, I'll be using ma'am as her title and she's fond of calling him 'sweetie' and 'hun', affectionate terms that reinforce her caregiver side of the relationship.

I've also created a physical power imbalance is he's about 5'8" and rather lean and she is 6' with a robust figure.

So far, it's one of those rare stories for me, where I just have an idea and not much of a plan and I'm pantsing a lot of it. It's really fleshed out the setting and his purpose in her home.

Sounds very similar to the approach I took with "Mommy" For Hire, in the gentle sub / dom approach to their relationship anyway. She took control, not in a cruel, mean spirited way, but with loving affirmation.

And "Yes, Ma'am" works just as well as "Yes, Mommy." Probably better given your character's military history.

I'm sure you'll do well with it.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Sounds very similar to the approach I took with "Mommy" For Hire, in the gentle sub / dom approach to their relationship anyway. She took control, not in a cruel, mean spirited way, but with loving affirmation.

And "Yes, Ma'am" works just as well as "Yes, Mommy." Probably better given your character's military history.

I'm sure you'll do well with it.

Thanks. I'll check yours out.

 

[Djmac1031]

Thanks. I'll check yours out.

Absolutely wasn't me trying to push you into reading it lol. But hey if you find it helpful in any way, cool.