so just how good would you say this is?

[silverwhisper]

sarojaede is experiencing a lack of confidence about her first story submitted to lit. those of us who've read it (MWY, bg, phaedre, myself) think it's pretty damned good.

what say you?

ed

 

[Sarojaede]

SW:

I'm going to kill you. Seriously..with a spoon...slowly....

 

[midwestyankee]

SW:

I'm going to kill you. Seriously..with a spoon...slowly....

May I watch?



I love to watch. Yesssss, I really love to watch.

 

[Brains_N_Boobs]

 

[Revluc]

but I may be a bit bias.

 

[silverwhisper]

i'm sorry, were you hating me just there, SJ? cuz i need to clean that glass i use to savor your hatred. :>

ed

 

[bobsgirl]

SJ, you know you love it!


Do we now have to genuflect in your presence?


Can I watch with you, sir P?

 

[Sarojaede]

May I watch?



I love to watch. Yesssss, I really love to watch.

Yes, you and BG may watch.

I'm using a spoon that's been in the freezer for extra punch, btw.


And BG, I swear...

/bows humbly to BG, MWY, and Silver

Thank you, my friends.

Rev, yes, you are biased, but I love you anyway.

BnB...thanks.

 

[Leah57]

Awesome, SJ!!!

Simply awesome!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

 

[Sarojaede]

Thank you, Leah.

 

[DwnNDrtyCowgirl]

its very good...i love it!

 

[pleasteasme]

Sj, all I can ask is why has it taken so long for you to share this beautiful gift with us??? Absolutely wonderful story!!!

I do hope you will be writing more!

 

[Nightbird]

Saro your story is very very good.. In fact I'm adding it to the story review thread.

 

[silverwhisper]

SJ: as the poll results clearly indicate, it's pretty damned good. don't kill the messenger.

ed

 

[Sarojaede]

I still hate you for doing this.

 

[Guest]

 

[silverwhisper]

i see i need to rinse out that glass, SJ. :>

scaly: you've got a few things going on in your life, dude. you'll see to it when you have the time.

ed

 

[MagicFingers]

Add MF to the list

Well done, Sarojaede.
Good first effort.

 

[angelkitty7888]

this sounds good to me and more chapters would be lovely i want to read more about these two and i want to see that dinner too.... lovely descriptions good character developement and almost no immediate plot (plot comes after sex in my books) sounds damn good to me beats my first writing efforts i wrote erotic fanfics for years and i still think they all sucked...

 

[Sarojaede]

Thank you...all of you.

I suppose I shouldn't really kill Silver....yet.

 

[onlyerics]

I thought it was an excellent story! I loved it! Great job, SJ!

 

[silverwhisper]

cool, she still won't kill me!

ed

 

[Guest]

 

[Sarojaede]

cool, she still won't kill me!

ed

0.o

Don't count on me not killing you.

 

[Fallenfromgrace]

I loved it