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[sirhugs]

been spending the last few weeks starting "stories" that go no where after a few hundred words- they just aren't speaking to me.

Anybody want this one?

“Does it really matter?”

The words hung in the air, as real as if visible. I had just accused my wife of cheating on me, and she asked whether it mattered. I stood there, jaw slack, stunned speechless. In the moment of silence, I realized that my cock was stiff. If most of my blood was not busy pulsing in that vein, I'm sure I would have blushed. Yet, my wife was unabashed, almost defiant.

“You've been telling me for years how the idea of me sucking another man's cock turns you on. Now, I know that you prefer to watch, but you can't have everything.”

She had not answered my question directly, but this was as good as an admission. Though her tousled hair, smeared makeup and mis-buttoned sun-dress told the tale. Her dreamy eyes and sloppy grin added the epilogue- she had sex with another man, and had loved it.

My throbbing cock told me that I wanted to hear about it.

“Yes, it does matter,” I croaked, my mouth suddenly cottony. “I want to hear all the details.”

Instead, without another word, she dropped to her knees, her red painted nails unzipping my fly as she knelt. The weight of my erection caused my cock to immediately pop out of my pants, almost slapping he in the eye as she grinned up at me.

 

[sirhugs]

no takers?

I have others...

 

[LordMhoram]

Loving wives?

I've been thinking on stepping into the mine field. I'm game to try it out.

Got anything more on this couple? Other thoughts about them? names? Occupations?

Or do you just want to see where someone runs with this?

 

[sirhugs]

Loving wives?

I've been thinking on stepping into the mine field. I'm game to try it out.

Got anything more on this couple? Other thoughts about them? names? Occupations?

Or do you just want to see where someone runs with this?

I'd love to see what you do with it.

Yeah, it is troll bait for sure.

Personally, I prefer happy ending, but don't let that constrain you if you write it.

If you do write it, please link to this thread.

 

[LordMhoram]

I'd love to see what you do with it.

Yeah, it is troll bait for sure.

Personally, I prefer happy ending, but don't let that constrain you if you write it.

If you do write it, please link to this thread.

Okay... give me a few days, and I promise to link it back here when it posts.

 

[ketalia]

been spending the last few weeks starting "stories" that go no where after a few hundred words- they just aren't speaking to me.

Anybody want this one?

“Does it really matter?”

The words hung in the air, as real as if visible. I had just accused my wife of cheating on me, and she asked whether it mattered. I stood there, jaw slack, stunned speechless. In the moment of silence, I realized that my cock was stiff. If most of my blood was not busy pulsing in that vein, I'm sure I would have blushed. Yet, my wife was unabashed, almost defiant.

“You've been telling me for years how the idea of me sucking another man's cock turns you on. Now, I know that you prefer to watch, but you can't have everything.”

She had not answered my question directly, but this was as good as an admission. Though her tousled hair, smeared makeup and mis-buttoned sun-dress told the tale. Her dreamy eyes and sloppy grin added the epilogue- she had sex with another man, and had loved it.

My throbbing cock told me that I wanted to hear about it.

“Yes, it does matter,” I croaked, my mouth suddenly cottony. “I want to hear all the details.”

Instead, without another word, she dropped to her knees, her red painted nails unzipping my fly as she knelt. The weight of my erection caused my cock to immediately pop out of my pants, almost slapping he in the eye as she grinned up at me.

How far can we twist it?

Instead, without another word, she dropped to her knees, her red painted nails unzipping my fly as she knelt. The weight of my erection caused my cock to immediately pop out of my pants, almost slapping he in the eye as she grinned up at me. She breathed gently over my aching cock as she went on.

"Only if you tell me how he does it, how he makes you feel."

I choked at her words. I'd been careful, so very careful, but clearly, I'd lost the high ground here. "It's not the same, he's a man. I'd never sleep with another woman."

Her hot tongue traced it's way up the vein running up my shaft, then trailed around the rim of my cock head. I groaned and leaned closer as my cock strained towards her red lips.

"No" she agreed as she held me back with a hand on my hip. "It's not the same. But if you want more of this," she sucked the head into her hot mouth, swirling her tongue around me before popping it out, "you're going to spill. I want all the nasty little details. And then we'll talk about what I did."

 

[LordMhoram]

story submitted

Fashionable Fantasy
What Happens When Rubber Meets the Road with a Common Fantasy?

Submitted just now, 6,200+ words in Loving Wives.

It's in .rtf format, so they'll have to approve it manually - could be up to a week.

Hope you enjoy. I'll post the link here when it's approved.

 

[sirhugs]

Fashionable Fantasy
What Happens When Rubber Meets the Road with a Common Fantasy?

Submitted just now, 6,200+ words in Loving Wives.

It's in .rtf format, so they'll have to approve it manually - could be up to a week.

Hope you enjoy. I'll post the link here when it's approved.

thanks. Looking forward to reading it.

 

[LordMhoram]

Fashionable Fantasy has just been approved. Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Not surprisingly, it has two votes already with a score of 2.5. I'm guessing one 1 vote and one 5 vote.

C'est la Loving Wives, n'est pas?

 

[shesnotcheating]

Fashionable Fantasy has just been approved. Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Not surprisingly, it has two votes already with a score of 2.5. I'm guessing one 1 vote and one 5 vote.

C'est la Loving Wives, n'est pas?

That would be an average of 3. You've either got a 1 and a 4, or a 2 and a 3. I'm betting the first.

 

[sirhugs]

Fashionable Fantasy has just been approved. Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Not surprisingly, it has two votes already with a score of 2.5. I'm guessing one 1 vote and one 5 vote.

C'est la Loving Wives, n'est pas?

c'est vrai

thanks for writing this. I enjoyed it, added my 5.

 

[nakdsub]

Please put a warning in a

prolouge saying it's a willing cuckold story, Please. Or put it in fetish.

 

[LordMhoram]

prolouge saying it's a willing cuckold story, Please. Or put it in fetish.

I expect this from the Trolls, Naked, but not from you!?

First, there is absolutely nothing about this story even close to being a fetish.

fetish (noun): an object or bodily part whose real or fantasied presence is psychologically necessary for sexual gratification and that is an object of fixation to the extent that it may interfere with complete sexual expression .​

Second, to be a 'cuckold' requires that the wife be unfaithful; this is debatable and in my opinion not accurate for this story. Even if we agreed, however, that it is a cuckold story, the first three sentences say:

"Does it really matter?"

The words hung in the air; their presence palpable.

I had just accused my wife of cheating, and she asked if it mattered!​

That was not enough to flag the nature of the story for you? Give you warning of where this was probably going?

Really?

I'd already determined, in fact, to state the nature of the story for any future LW tales I might write. There are extremely narrow-minded people writing critical comments in that category. Yet though I find the bulk of these comments to be ludicrous, I decided I'd be magnanimous and, to this extent, acknowledge their right to their opinions.

I am disappointed, however, to find your name in that list of people.

 

[shesnotcheating]

prolouge saying it's a willing cuckold story, Please. Or put it in fetish.

The category was meant for exactly this type of story. Look at a sampling of the oldest stories and 90+% of them are "hot wife" stories and highly rated, if the trolls haven't found them and 1-bombed them. The trolls showed up 2 or 3 years ago, and declared, "loving wives don't behave like that". Says who?

First, the loving in the category title is meant as a euphemism for fucking. So, the category is meant to be for stories of wives fucking, and who they fuck is completely up to the author. Second, who are you, or your troll buddies, to decide that a wife who accedes to her husbands desires is not loving?

Yes, traditional morality says that such acts are sinful. And, if that's what you truly believe, you have every right to that belief. But, guess what? Graphic depictions of sex between a married man and women are equally sinful, according to traditional morality. So, either stay and enjoy or go away. Nobody wants to hear your moralizing.

 

[shesnotcheating]

Story

Mhoram,

Meant to comment in my first post but had to leave suddenly. The story was not exactly my cup of tea. I prefer an innocent wife who "accidently" goes astray. But the writing itself was extremely well done, so I "fived" it.

 

[LordMhoram]

Mhoram,

Meant to comment in my first post but had to leave suddenly. The story was not exactly my cup of tea. I prefer an innocent wife who "accidently" goes astray. But the writing itself was extremely well done, so I "fived" it.

Thank you. For that, I shall put "Write an LW where innocent wife 'slips up'" on my to do list, and let you know when I've done it

 

[sirhugs]

Thank you. For that, I shall put "Write an LW where innocent wife 'slips up'" on my to do list, and let you know when I've done it

I prefer an innocent wife corrupted to please hubby(often, by hubby's scheming), if you're taking requests.

 

[LordMhoram]

I prefer an innocent wife corrupted to please hubby(often, by hubby's scheming), if you're taking requests.

My dance card is rapidly filling

It sounds like something I could write, so sure, why not. another entry for the "todo" list.

 

[LordMhoram]

I prefer an innocent wife corrupted to please hubby(often, by hubby's scheming), if you're taking requests.

First person pov of the husband?

Mhoram,

Meant to comment in my first post but had to leave suddenly. The story was not exactly my cup of tea. I prefer an innocent wife who "accidently" goes astray. But the writing itself was extremely well done, so I "fived" it.

How about you? From who's perspective? Or do you like multiple fp pov? tp omniscient? What's your pleasure?

 

[sirhugs]

First person pov of the husband?

that's how I tend to write them myself...

 

[shesnotcheating]

First person pov of the husband?



How about you? From who's perspective? Or do you like multiple fp pov? tp omniscient? What's your pleasure?

I'm surprised that you even mentiones it because so few people like it, but I'm part of the small minority that prefer the multiple first person point of view.