Slither slither slither slither went the tongue

[MagicFingers]

One of Tom Wolfe's winning sentences began.
He has won an award for bad sex writing. See this article for details:
http://www.cnn.com/2004/SHOWBIZ/books/12/13/odd.literature.sex.reut/index.html

 

[tolyk]

Someone already posted about it

 

[cantdog]

Dood. The man is kinda embarrassing. Did you catch him on the Daily Show?

 

[impressive]

I just can't help hearing "Clang, clang, clang went the trolley ..." when I read this. Sooooooooooo sexy, ain't it?

 

[Guest]

I just can help hearing "Clang, clang, clang went the trolley ..." when I read this. Sooooooooooo sexy, ain't it?

thank you
im so glad i wasnt the only one

 

[impressive]

Well, we thinks alike (which I like).

 

[Anopheles]

That sentence ws so amazingly bad! I may not be the best writer in the world, but all I can say is WOW! It was so bad it was almost good. And to top it off he used:

"otorhinolaryngological caverns"

in erotica.

Simply amazing.