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This story is very good and well written. I am a big fan of two young girls going at it for the first time and discovering themselves. I would just like to commend the author, LilithAffair... I found that the only thing wrong with your story is that it is a little short. I urge you to keep it up, because the more you write, the better your stories will become, and you really have potential. So keep it up..
