skillful lesbian seduction ideas needed.

[peterpan]

I have most of a 4-chapter tale fleshed out, but the most central scene barely begun.

Please help me brainstorm up interesting ideas for how 1-4 characters could seduce one very unwilling one who they are holding prisoner. It is pretty NC and a bit B&D but the focus is entirely on the captives' pleasure, not the captors'. What would make YOU putty in their paws?

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Here is some background, but don't get tangled up in it.
The following will sound pretty contrived, but thats why there are two chapters before this scene

The scene is the lesbian seduction of an almost Joan-of-Arc style character by four 'dolls', artificial creatures she considers to be soulless. She comes from a society that brought her up to believe a woman will lose her soul if ever she 'surrenders to carnal pleasure', and has trained her to be able to resist such, but they are very skillful and have senses so accute they can read her emotions and almost her thoughts.

The four Dolls: The Mother, who will mainly act to guide her daughters. She is unnaturally tall. The most mature daughter, who is about the heroine's height and will do most of the seduction, and the two twins that tend to do things together.

The heroine resists to the last, and is feverish with pleasure before she finally is conquered.

But what actually happens? Any ideas for making it more psychological, or any ideas that you just think are sexy?

 

[evesdream]

I have most of a 4-chapter tale fleshed out, but the most central scene barely begun.

The following will sound pretty contrived, but thats why there are two chapters before this scene

The scene is the lesbian seduction of an almost Joan-of-Arc style character by four 'dolls', artificial creatures she considers to be soulless. She comes from a society that brought her up to believe a woman will lose her soul if ever she 'surrenders to carnal pleasure', and has trained her to be able to resist such, but they are very skillful and have senses so accute they can read her emotions and almost her thoughts.

The four Dolls: The Mother, who will mainly act to guide her daughters. She is unnaturally tall. The most mature daughter, who is about the heroine's height and will do most of the seduction, and the two twins that tend to do things together.

The heroine resists to the last, and is feverish with pleasure before she finally is conquered.

But what actually happens? Any ideas for making it more psychological, or any ideas that you just think are sexy?

Sounds complex. Could you explain a little more? How does the main character run into the Dolls? Is she their captive or...maybe they are captives of hers?

How does the main character resemble Joan of Arc?

 

[peterpan]

Sounds complex. Could you explain a little more? How does the main character run into the Dolls? Is she their captive or...maybe they are captives of hers?

How does the main character resemble Joan of Arc?

Ah. I might rewrite that intro to be a bit less intimidating, because I am mainly just looking for brainstorm ideas for the mechanics of the scene, and don't want to limit it to people that are interested in this kind of SF story.

But to answer your question (and this will only get more complex), the Dolls captured her while she was trying to destroy their home. They are not angry because they think very differently to humans. (They have no emotions of their own, but can perceive and enjoy a human's emotions)

By Joan-of-Arc, I just mean she is a warrior trying to do Gods will, and from her point of view, she knows she is heading for inevitable tragedy, from which only sufficient faith in God can save her. Naturally he doesn't, and eventually (when she absolutely can resist no further) she succumbs to the attentions of the Dolls.

 

[Chicklet]

hmm...

if it were a story i were writing i'd tie up the captive and have the captors tease her (gentle nipple play, general toying around) until she doesn't care *who* they are. from that point it's easy to do a believable "in love with the captor" thing.

Chicklet

 

[peterpan]

hmm...

if it were a story i were writing i'd tie up the captive and have the captors tease her (gentle nipple play, general toying around) until she doesn't care *who* they are. from that point it's easy to do a believable "in love with the captor" thing.

Chicklet

That's pretty much Plan A

To make it more intense, she has been trained how to resist temptation (read: deny orgasm) through prayer since (she is led to beleive) the sensation is that of the soul tearing free from the body.

To avoid the plot slowdowns of tying and untying, the twins or the mother will probably do much of the restraining. They are far stronger than a human and don't tire. (I might insert a scene where Alice sees a doll overgrown with vines supporting a peice of architecture, for example)

Also, I am looking for ideas where them getting into her head is part of the process. She has had a VERY repressed upbringing.

I want to repeat though, I am looking for all ideas. don't worry if they don't seem to apply directly. This is brainstorming!

 

[peterpan]

For a start, I am a guy, so naturally I have a pretty dull repertoire of 'toying around'

 

[evesdream]

The mother could teach the twins how to pleasure humans by allowing them to use the main character as a demonstration model; telling them where to put their hands, what to feel for, how to move them, and later the lips, mouths, tongues, breath play.

You said: "I might insert a scene where Alice sees a doll overgrown with vines supporting a peice of architecture, for example"

I bet you could incorporate some fairly dramatic dream sequences. Perhaps the heroine can induce in herself a trance through her prayer, meant to inhibit her physical senses.

And of course, because this is an erotic story, the trance dreams instead become frightfully sexy and bring her back to what the Dolls are doing to her and making her feel. The dreams themselves could become progressively more intense in harmony with the plot. Ha, the voice of God could make a cameo in one of them, email me for his agent's number

 

[peterpan]

The mother could teach the twins how to pleasure humans by allowing them to use the main character as a demonstration model; telling them where to put their hands, what to feel for, how to move them, and later the lips, mouths, tongues, breath play.

Actually, I will be using this idea. These particular dolls have been brought up without exposure to humans, and now the mother is going to help them get in touch with their inner doll.

I bet you could incorporate some fairly dramatic dream sequences. Perhaps the heroine can induce in herself a trance through her prayer, meant to inhibit her physical senses.

There could be some delerium involved, and replaying painful events from her life, to resist pleasure. A combination of some interogation and intuition by the dolls lets them 'get inside her head', and in her delerium this could be a bit more literal. I already have the moment of her rapture all 'prose'd out and there is a minor halucination already used there.

I have also started a thread in the Authors thread on foreplay. Just feeling unimaginative at the moment. Got any favorite foreplay ideas?

 

[peterpan]

Sigh.

Still stuck.

I have tried to start it, but always feel I am rehashing something from one of my two-and-a-half other tales.

Rats.

Maybe I should just face the fact that my first two were perfect, and said all there was to be said about the human condition, leaving nothing left to write about. A bugger when that happens...