Simple magic story (category: lw, sf, or mc)

alias x

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Just an idea that popped into my head.

A touch of magic

Girl's husband has the ability to magically induce incredible orgasms. Though he used it in college to get a reputation (and thus to get more sex), he's never used it on his wife because doing so doesn't give him any pleasure and he doesn't get enough sex as it is. He doesn't want her to know about his gift because it's so powerful that she wouldn't want regular sex any more. And he doesn't want to make her have sex for it because he knows she won't be as enthusiastic (and might resent it, too). So, he comes up with a rather simple plan.

He uses a bit of his power on her (just a pinch) after convincing her to have sex. She has the best orgasm she's ever had. This leaves her wanting more, and the next day she tries to initiate sex. But he declines, saying last night was great and he just doesn't feel like it. Considering how great it was for her, his lie is somewhat believeable. Then he tells her maybe this will make her feel better, and touches her arm with one finger and releases all of his power.

Now, this gives him no pleasure at all (it's a one way gift), but he knows she'll want more. He apologizes to her future request, but explains (lies) that his magic just won't work if he's feeling horny, and that the very act of being asked to use the power usually makes him think about sex.

She tries dressing less provocative, but he knows why and points out it's only making him hornier. Soon, she is desperately trying to end his horniness. The only method that worked (or appeared to work in the past) was to just give him great enough sex that he doesn't want any more. But eventually, even this stops working. Though he has rarely used his power, his wife is already basically his sex slave. Eventually, she even gets despearate enough to start finding her husband other girls, even having sex with them too. She even starts to enjoy it, though it is likely this is at least partly just a pavlovian response to the rewards she gets out of it. Although plenty of rumors spread that his wife is a slut, there are a couple of lucky women who make her husband not be horny (or so he claims when he uses his power on them) and this rumor spreads even faster (though nobody believes it except those lucky few).

What he never tells his wife, of course, is that he is always horny. That's part and parcel with his magical gift.
 
You say:

alias x said:
... And he doesn't want to make her have sex for it because he knows she won't be as enthusiastic (and might resent it, too). ...
Then in the rest of the outline he does exactly that.
 
snooper said:
You say:

Then in the rest of the outline he does exactly that.

Irony would be fitting...instead of him, she falls for the gross old fart next door.
 
snooper said:
You say:

Then in the rest of the outline he does exactly that.


You misunderstand. He doesn't want to say to her, "I'll only use my magic on you if you give me sex." His actions are very similar to this, but this way his wife doesn't know that it is his fault.
 
sirhugs said:
Irony would be fitting...instead of him, she falls for the gross old fart next door.

The gross old fart next door cannot provide magical orgasm.
 
alias x said:
The gross old fart next door cannot provide magical orgasm.


says who? perhaps his farts make his tongue magical
 
I was feeling pissy about this one too- but, you know, it has possibilities. The guy could be a very interesting anti-hero. The kind you hate to love. :p
Or, maybe he could learn a lesson somehow.
I'm not going to do it, though- I have too much on my plate as it is!
 
Better version of story

Stella_Omega said:
I was feeling pissy about this one too- but, you know, it has possibilities. The guy could be a very interesting anti-hero. The kind you hate to love. :p
Or, maybe he could learn a lesson somehow.
I'm not going to do it, though- I have too much on my plate as it is!

He's not really evil, just selfish. And as mentioned at the end, part and parcel with having this ability is being very horny, so one should bear in mind it is not totally his fault. I guess this story works better if that horniness issue is mentioned at the beginning.

Anyhow, a lesson is not a bad idea. The story I presented isn't that great, but it works ok as a beginning half of a middle. Now, to provide the other half of the middle and an ending. Lets take the full circle route, because happy endings are always nice.

The simple way to teach him a lesson would be for one of the people who his wife finds for him to know about him from college and for his wife to learn that he's lying about what triggers the ability.

Her revenge could be to cut him off from sex completely. She could explain that she thinks this will work too, and point out that he has no right to complain given what he's had for sex lately. The gift-induced horniness combined with his wife's incredible patience (she now knows he is lying and thus can be very stubborn) would eventually force him to cave.

Considering all the sex he'd gotten out of the lie, telling the truth would be a scary thought, so he'd just lie and say her plan to make him lose his horniness through abstinence had worked. After using his ability on her, he'd claim to be horny again and she'd have sex with him the next day, but would abstain for long after to remove his horniness. It would happen faster this time, but he wouldn't get sex afterwards.

Soon, he'd barely be getting any sex and would be giving his wife orgasms any time she wanted. And his wife would be able to argue to him that he was doing fine without the sex, since the fact that his ability was working showed that he wasn't horny anyways.

Eventually, he would tell the truth (i.e. that his ability to use his gift had nothing to do with horniness), as even fear of his wife's intense anger would be outweighed by the fact that he was desperate for more sex. She'd admit she already knew and was just punishing him for lying. But now that he'd told the truth, things would be OK.

The next day, his wife would blindfold him and tell him she had a surprise for him since he told the truth. And that surprise would be a wild orgy. At this point, the state would be that he'd be getting basically as much sex as he was getting when he was using his gift to get his wife to give him more sex, but now he'd be using his gift more often. And eventually, he'd be getting even more sex, as the rumors about what he could do started to become far more widespead due to the fact that he was now using his gift MUCH more often than before.


Now we have a story where the lie is punished and the truth is rewarded. And the ending is happy. Much better, right?
 
TheCaptain said:
Are you serious, or just takin the piss outta this guy's ideas? :confused:

Capt

more just being silly, and also illustrating that all things really are possible in magic land....
 
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