Silence Is My Curse

This is a beautiful poem, Carson..who wrote it? It was a gift to you? That is unbelievably wonderful...
 
I had to read it several times myself before I really understood it.

The last time someone wrote me a poem it was dirty. This brought tears to my eyes and I'm so glad you all like it.
 
Are you "dissing" my verse of the Good Ship Venus?

I am wounded to the very heart. It's not easy to find three polysyllabic rhymes in five lines.

Shanglan
 
BlackShanglan said:
Are you "dissing" my verse of the Good Ship Venus?

I am wounded to the very heart. It's not easy to find three polysyllabic rhymes in five lines.

Shanglan

I wasn't talking about you, actually. Make that the last TWO poems!
 
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