*sigh* Another day, another blow job scene...

[carsonshepherd]

After 60,000+ words, I'm running out of ideas for sex scenes. I'm actually beginning to dread them.

Anyone want to create some "stock" blow job scenes for me to customize and paste in as needed? (you know, like "stock footage" on the news...)

Maybe it's because I like writing dialogue better than sex scenes. Am I the only one this ever happens to?

 

[Guest]

 

[carsonshepherd]

at least you've got some to back and forth on... i only work on one story at a time so it's my only option. Just press on...

 

[CharleyH]

DAMN! How utterly timely. Can I post my odd, maybe conservative but doubt it too much, GAY BJ Scene HERE FOR REVIEW? LOOKING CUTE, and fluttering lashes :d

 

[carsonshepherd]

abso-fucking-lutely, gorgeous!

 

[CharleyH]

deleted

 

[carsonshepherd]

that was freaking beautiful.

 

[rikaaim]

You could always make a request for "inspiration" ya know.

 

[CharleyH]

that was freaking beautiful.

No changes? I was gunna make the end more deathly, thoughtit a bit conservative? THE BJ was good? Then we can go on and talk fucking and NO BJ's

 

[CharleyH]

You could always make a request for "inspiration" ya know.

YES I KNOW I NEED TO EXPLAIN: give me a second.

AH RIKAAIM has a thought, AND combined with his ASS PIC - it always makes good discussion, BUT NO BJ's here I could say I am dulled (never bored) by pussy) as Carson describes BJs. So let me see, let me see ...

Taking from my trip ... a bridge, horses passing (not Shang) , but you have enough time in between the tours ... MAYBE OR maybe not! A single, OR YUMMY, the horse riders all of them? All ten? :

 

[carsonshepherd]

No changes? I was gunna make the end more deathly, thoughtit a bit conservative? THE BJ was good? Then we can go on and talk fucking and NO BJ's

the last paragraph could be just a teeny bit more clear. I read it twice, but was left wondering just a little.

 

[rikaaim]

YES I KNOW I NEED TO EXPLAIN: give me a second.

AH RIKAAIM has a thought, AND combined with his ASS PIC - it always makes good discussion, BUT NO BJ's here I could say I am dulled (never bored) by pussy) as Carson describes BJs. So let me see, let me see ...

Taking from my trip ... a bridge, horses passing (not Shang) , but you have enough time in between the tours ... MAYBE OR maybe not! A single, OR YUMMY, the horse riders all of them? All ten? :

Okay, please forgive my rudeness, but I've read this three times and still have no clue what exactly you're talking about. I see my name, my ass, and interesting discussions, but then a bridge and a horse and ten (?) shows up outta nowhere. ???

So you're saying I can't pull down Carson's pants and suck his cock while he video tapes it for reference later?

 

[CharleyH]

the last paragraph could be just a teeny bit more clear. I read it twice, but was left wondering just a little.

I wanted to say he was killed, but thought it a bit morose? What was your thought?

BTW you need to go out tonight sexy and

 

[carsonshepherd]

I wanted to say he was killed, but thought it a bit morose? What was your thought?

BTW you need to go out tonight sexy and

maybe don't say straight out he was killed, but make it clear. who did not have any direct invovlement with the murder....[/I] ??? Just my humble opinion.

Okay, mine.

“Niko… what are you doing,” Bran whispered without protest as Niko lazily dropped his hand to seek out Bran’s cock, stroking it with his palm, making it rise despite Bran’s own better judgement.

Grabbing his shoulders Niko firmly pushed him back to the table where the books were spread. His grin was focused and his eyes hungry. Perched on the edge of the table, propped back against his hands, Bran watched in amused disbelief as Niko went to the door and turned the lock. It clicked and he turned back around and his eyes were focused on the outline of Bran’s now-stiff cock pressed against the cloth of his pants, straining against the buttons. Licking his lips, Niko crossed the room like a cat intent on its prey. The look in his eyes sent a delicious little shiver through Bran while he waited for Niko to reach him.

A feral little growl came from Niko. He stalked up to Bran and put his hands on his thighs, stroking up them with his strong hands, reaching for the buttons of his pants. Bran still thought he was mad, but he tilted his head back and closed his eyes as Niko popped the buttons open and wrapped his warm hand around the smooth shaft.

“I love this cock,” Niko whispered.

He pushed Bran back onto the table and jerked his pants down. Books went flying, knocked to the floor; Bran’s fingers clutched the edge of the table as Niko greedily sucked him down. He was rough and hungry and Bran moaned low in his throat. He wasn’t going to last long…so fierce, red wet lips a halo around his shaft, the face of a cherub and the eyes of a dirty angel looking up into his from between his spread legs, hands gripping his hips, urging him deeper until he felt soft breath in the curls at the base of his cock.

“I want your cum.” Niko’s breath came in harsh gasps from his lips until he wrapped them hungrily around Bran’s shaft. Bran bit back a moan, could not make a sound, but inside he screamed yesyesyes, so good. He thrust hard into Niko’s throat and heard an answering rumble of excitement that vibated around his cock… his hands clutched the edge of the library table so hard they hurt, his spine tensed as cold tingles shot up his belly from his cock. So close…

Hand around the base of his cock, gently tugging at his balls, exactly the way he liked it, fingers pressing the smooth spot under his balls, stroking his hole. Oh how he wanted those fingers sliding inside him but it was too late…

The shout exploded inside him almost too fast for him to catch it before it burst out and betrayed him. The icy tingles exploded and his orgasm swept through him in waves, and Niko hummed with contentment as he greedily swallowed the spurts of cum that flowed into his mouth and dripped down his chin. Bran laughed hysterically and his head fell vacantly to the side, eyes unfocused, while Niko rose to his feet and wiped his mouth with his sleeve. The thought of his cum smeared on Niko’s royal wardrobe made Bran practically roll with laughter until tears came into the corners of his eyes, and Niko grinned as he pulled Bran up from his position sprawled across the table, laughing as they kissed and Niko’s tongue dipped deep into Bran’s mouth sharing his sweet flavor.

 

[Celtic Princess]

*strokes hair*


See? That wasn't so bad, was it?

 

[rikaaim]

*strokes hair*


See? That wasn't so bad, was it?

To the contrary it was most enjoyable. Thank you.

 

[Celtic Princess]

lol



I didn't write it.


I do admit to encouraging it along though.

 

[CharleyH]

the last paragraph could be just a teeny bit more clear. I read it twice, but was left wondering just a little.

what do you mean more clear? if you do not mind? I really wanted to get street prositute, who disappeared - dead. Is that too much in a sex thing? As in will guys HATE IT?

Edit LOL i am badddddd

 

[CharleyH]

maybe don't say straight out he was killed, but make it clear. who did not have any direct invovlement with the murder....[/I] ??? Just my humble opinion.

Okay, mine.

“Niko… what are you doing,” Bran whispered without protest as Niko lazily dropped his hand to seek out Bran’s cock, stroking it with his palm, making it rise despite Bran’s own better judgement.

Grabbing his shoulders Niko firmly pushed him back to the table where the books were spread. His grin was focused and his eyes hungry. Perched on the edge of the table, propped back against his hands, Bran watched in amused disbelief as Niko went to the door and turned the lock. It clicked and he turned back around and his eyes were focused on the outline of Bran’s now-stiff cock pressed against the cloth of his pants, straining against the buttons. Licking his lips, Niko crossed the room like a cat intent on its prey. The look in his eyes sent a delicious little shiver through Bran while he waited for Niko to reach him.

A feral little growl came from Niko. He stalked up to Bran and put his hands on his thighs, stroking up them with his strong hands, reaching for the buttons of his pants. Bran still thought he was mad, but he tilted his head back and closed his eyes as Niko popped the buttons open and wrapped his warm hand around the smooth shaft.

“I love this cock,” Niko whispered.

He pushed Bran back onto the table and jerked his pants down. Books went flying, knocked to the floor; Bran’s fingers clutched the edge of the table as Niko greedily sucked him down. He was rough and hungry and Bran moaned low in his throat. He wasn’t going to last long…so fierce, red wet lips a halo around his shaft, the face of a cherub and the eyes of a dirty angel looking up into his from between his spread legs, hands gripping his hips, urging him deeper until he felt soft breath in the curls at the base of his cock.

“I want your cum.” Niko’s breath came in harsh gasps from his lips until he wrapped them hungrily around Bran’s shaft. Bran bit back a moan, could not make a sound, but inside he screamed yesyesyes, so good. He thrust hard into Niko’s throat and heard an answering rumble of excitement that vibated around his cock… his hands clutched the edge of the library table so hard they hurt, his spine tensed as cold tingles shot up his belly from his cock. So close…

Hand around the base of his cock, gently tugging at his balls, exactly the way he liked it, fingers pressing the smooth spot under his balls, stroking his hole. Oh how he wanted those fingers sliding inside him but it was too late…

The shout exploded inside him almost too fast for him to catch it before it burst out and betrayed him. The icy tingles exploded and his orgasm swept through him in waves, and Niko hummed with contentment as he greedily swallowed the spurts of cum that flowed into his mouth and dripped down his chin. Bran laughed hysterically and his head fell vacantly to the side, eyes unfocused, while Niko rose to his feet and wiped his mouth with his sleeve. The thought of his cum smeared on Niko’s royal wardrobe made Bran practically roll with laughter until tears came into the corners of his eyes, and Niko grinned as he pulled Bran up from his position sprawled across the table, laughing as they kissed and Niko’s tongue dipped deep into Bran’s mouth sharing his sweet flavor.

Ok did not see it - get it - NIKO Interests me

 

[carsonshepherd]

Ok did not see it - get it - NIKO Interests me

this is a scene from my novel.

to charley

 

[carsonshepherd]

what do you mean more clear? if you do not mind? I really wanted to get street prositute, who disappeared - dead. Is that too much in a sex thing? As in will guys HATE IT?

Edit LOL i am badddddd

no, i don't hate it. i like it a lot. it's very lyrical.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Had nothing to do..

Hello just stumbling around in the dark and came across this thread.. decided hey why not write a quick blow job scene off the top of my head.. don't have anything to do just yet right now.. no blow jobs to give so might as well pretend I do.... right:
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I walk out into the barn, the smell of fresh straw stirs memories of the many times I had spent here with my husband, enjoying the work that we did together side by side. I let my hand run along the stalls as I watch the horses move and shift, wanting to be ridden. I haven't ridden in years, the horses are lead out and released to roam the ranch and Jason works and rides them, but not I.

Micheal and I had been riding that day, the day I lost him. We had decided to ride together, sharing our stallion Beast, my hands curled tight around his waist. I can still feel his warm back and his heart beating against my palm as we rode deeper into the woods. I close my eyes and the accident comes rushing back to me, crowding out the happy memories and replacing them with the screams from our horse, my own terror ripping from my throat as, Beast reared up tossing me to the ground. I remember watching Micheal try and control Beast, pulling his reins and trying to keep his balance as the horse jumped and bucked. I tremble as the memories thicken, in color they rush over my lids.

The ground looked as if it were alive and that is when I saw the danger, Beast had been startled by a nest of snakes. I scurried up to my feet and moved as far as I could away from Beast's hooves and the fury of reptiles that were causing our horse to act as he had never done before. I saw it happen in slow motion. The bite of the snake on Beast's leg, the final throw that made Micheal lose his balance, falling, landing hard onto the ground, and as if it were possible to slow time even more, I saw his head hit the jagged rock. Beast's screams and my own are what brought Jason running into the woods. He had found me, lying across my husband's body, our stallion breathing hard on his side, struggling to rise as the poision ate away at his life.

"Maggie?" the voice of my ranch manager brings me back to reality, turning I wipe the tears from my eyes.

"Awww Maggie." he walks towards me and pulls me close. I grab onto Jason holding him tight, he is now my best friend. Micheal had introduced me to Jason after our first date, later I was told that he had told Jason he was going to marry me after that first date. Now Jason was my right hand and if it hadn't been for him, I never would have kept my ranch.

"Jason, it is still so hard. You would think after so long I would be able to live again, but I can't. I just don't know how to go on with my life."

"I know Maggie. I still miss him too. Come let's ride today, you and me. I'll saddle Bell for you, she's still as calm as she ever was."

"I don't know. I still see it as if it happened yesterday."

"Maggie, you miss the horses, they miss you. It is time, time to move on, to try and start again."

I feel a presence blow through the barn, sailing in on a breeze, I hear Micheal telling me it is ok, ok to go on, ok to live and love again. I close my eyes and absorb his spirit, breathing deeply I hold it in me, feeling his arms around me one last time, before I exhale and the presence leaves, but in its wake I have been left with a calm, a peace that I havn't felt since that day. Looking up at Jason I see a man that has been my husband's best friend, my friend and now my best friend. For the first time in forever, I feel myself blush and wonder about my appearance.

"Yes, Jason. It is time I look around and appreciate what I have left. Let's saddle up Diamond, I don't feel like being on a docile horse today, I want to ride a stallion." I smile wide to myself as I see the blush on Jason's cheeks, knowing that he is thinking of that last statement.

We ride out over the ranch, inspecting the fencing, the new born calves, moving across the open fields, enjoying the day. We move towards the woods, Jason looks over to me, I node yes and together we move through the dense forest. I follow Jason and Chief, as I lead Diamond around sticks and logs, I know Jason is avoiding Micheal's accident by taking the long path to the river, and I appreciate that, knowing that it would have made this first step out difficult.

We arrive at the river, Jason removes Chiefs bridle and saddle, leaving him to roam around the meadow and the river. Moving to Diamond he reaches out and helps me slide down from my high perch. I notice the smell of horse and leather on him and how warm his hands feel on my hips. I watch his arms move as he frees Diamond of his own saddle and bridal, giving the horse a pat on the rumb, he turns back to me.

I can sense the change in the both of us and I know that this is in my hands. I remember the last few years and recall the smiles that Jason had cast my way, the innocent touches he gave me, the hugs we shared slowly becoming a little longer then needed. I look up into his eyes and for the first time see desire and need reflected in them, and I know that he sees those in me also. "Maggie."

My name on his lips is all I need as I step up to him, our lips meeting in a heated kiss, one of hunger, one of bottled passion. Teeth bite and gnaw as our tongues battle each others, moving faster we thrusts and taste, stroke and caress, a kiss of need erupting from us both. I move my head to his neck, his hands tangle in my hair. I bite at his skin, tasting the salt from his body, enjoying the sting on my scalp as he pulls and tugs at my hair, relishing the feel of my teeth on his body.

I feel as if an animal has been released from my soul, caged up for so long needing to be free. I put my hands to his shirt and pull away the snaps exposing his chest to my hands, my mouth, my teeth. I immediately descend on his nipple, sucking and biting it, my tongue moving long laps across the hard tip. Jason's growls urge me on, I move to the other side, sucking harder, and biting into his flesh. My hands work on his belt, then release the button and zipper of his jeans. I run my hands into his briefs and I stroke his hard cock, moaning against his nipple I work my thumb over the head.

I slide down to my knees, my hands moving with me pulling his jeans and boxers down to his knees. I grasp his hard cock into my hand stroking it while my other moves to his balls. I long to quickly have my way with him, but I want to reawaken my passion slowly and savor this moment, this new phase in my life. I fondle his testicles, letting my fingers stroke each sphere hidden inside the smooth sack, my nails graze across its crevices. My mouth rest just over the head of his cock, I let my lips press a kiss over him, my tongue sneaks out to taste the wet liquid that has escaped. He groans as he feels my warm breath hit him. I slide my mouth over the head of his cock enjoying the swolleness of it, how it fills my mouth. I slide my mouth further onto his shaft, taking him in a little deeper, but not fully, my tongue pressing against his head.

I lift my mouth from his cock and lick the shaft, my tongue making long strokes down its length, then back up again. Swirling my tongue over his head I slide my tongue down again this time I move my tongue to his left testicle, sucking it in, caressing him with each lap and stroke. His hand on my head brings tingles to my scalp as I move over to his right side. My tongue pushes his ball back and forth as I slowly coax it into my mouth, sucking gently enjoying the feel of the sphere moving inside my warm haven.

I look up at Jason, seeing his eyes close and his features contorting as my mouth devours him. I release his balls back into my hand and hold them feel them in my palm as my tongue strokes back up to the head of his cock. I take in the head and suck greedly on it, tasting more of his juice, enjoying its oily texture, before letting my mouth slide onto the full shaft. Using my tongue to stroke his hard shaft as my mouth moves up and down his cock, slowly letting his whole cock, fill up my mouth. My hand presses into his ass as I pull him closer into me. My mouth slides over him, angling my head I take him in deeper, my teeth gently graze his cock, letting the walls of his shaft get stimulated as my tongue works on the back of it.

My lips roll over the thick head as I look up to Jason his eyes full of heat and passion, his face showing his need to watch me as I suck and swallow all he has to offer. My mouth slides partially on his cock, as I feel the first shot of cum hit my throat I close my eyes and drink him, sucking as if he were a straw and I had anything to drink for years, and his seed is my living nector. As his cum fills my mouth, I allow my own orgasm to free itself, my cum covers my panties, soaking them and my jeans. He calls out my name as I suck his cock, finishing his cum, keeping it for myself. His last spasm erupts into my mouth, swallowing that I move my mouth from his cock. I lick the shaft, cleaning it, slowly pressing gentle kisses against it before rising up to press my lips to his.
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Well hope you can use some of that for any new ideas you may have in your writing.

 

[Rhys]

After 60,000+ words, I'm running out of ideas for sex scenes. I'm actually beginning to dread them.

Anyone want to create some "stock" blow job scenes for me to customize and paste in as needed? (you know, like "stock footage" on the news...)

Maybe it's because I like writing dialogue better than sex scenes. Am I the only one this ever happens to?

Go read TSM I had fun with my bj stuff.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Also feel free to PM me .. if you see some error that needs fixed ok. I had fun writing it.. hope you don't mind the length, if you want the BJ scene longer let me know and I'll come back and edit, if I feel I can add more to it that is. I'm off to bed. Have a great day, and thanks for giving me something to do.