Penelope Street
Literotica Guru
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If you haven't already guessed, this thread's about showing, telling, and (yes!) orgasms, particularly how to make them bigger and better- literary ones, that is.
Many new writers struggle understanding the difference between showing and telling and experienced authors are hardly immune to the lure of telling. Of course, we could parrot any of the dozens of websites that seek to explain the difference, but what fun would that be?
Instead, we'd like to invite members to share their favorite orgasmic moments from posted stories. This forum being about discussion, members are also welcome to do just that- discuss which posted moments work best and, of course, which are telling and which are showing.
Oh- be sure and post a link so anyone hooked by your climax can find your story!
Many new writers struggle understanding the difference between showing and telling and experienced authors are hardly immune to the lure of telling. Of course, we could parrot any of the dozens of websites that seek to explain the difference, but what fun would that be?
Instead, we'd like to invite members to share their favorite orgasmic moments from posted stories. This forum being about discussion, members are also welcome to do just that- discuss which posted moments work best and, of course, which are telling and which are showing.
Oh- be sure and post a link so anyone hooked by your climax can find your story!