Should this be here?

[Perfect_Trust]

I posted in the story ideas, but I'm now thinking it would have been better here?

https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=477616

 

[Boxlicker101]

Since you are asking our opinion as to whether a story is too extreme for Lit., this is the right place. I'm assuming that you are thinking of writing it youself, not tossing it out as an idea.

I don't think it would be too extreme, as long as there was not too much violence. Tying her up for sex would be okay, but not torture.

 

[Perfect_Trust]

Since you are asking our opinion as to whether a story is too extreme for Lit., this is the right place. I'm assuming that you are thinking of writing it youself, not tossing it out as an idea.

Thanks Boxlicker,

No, I am not writing it myself, as my other thread states it was written for me by a friend. He wanted feedback, I dont like it. Others might but I wondered whether it would be likely to get through submission.

Perfect

 

[Perfect_Trust]

This was my original post in the Story Ideas forum

Hi there,

I wondered if anyone can tell me what is considered too extreme for the non consent stories? I have a story that was sent to me for feedback, but I'm not sure I'm the best person to asses it. So, I was considering submitting it on here (with the authors consent) to see what kind of feedback it would receive.

A brief outline:
Dom/sub captured by the Russian military & locked in a dungeon for the purpose of humiliating/tortouring a russian girl (25)who has to be suitably punished for her part in child abuse/murder under the guise of religion. The child abuse does NOT feature in the story, it is simply the reason for her being there. The torture is not extreme, mostly centres on her humiliation by being forced into partaking in sex acts with the Dom & sub whilst being watched by the Russian military.

It didn't do it for me as I was the sub character in the story, & personally would not enjoy having a sex act performed on me by someone who was guilty of the crime of child abuse. The author's reasons were that he was trying to find a good enough reason for a woman to be capable of tortouring another woman (he doesn't know me very well, I can think of plenty ).

So, would a story like that be rejected on the grounds of why the torture/humiliation was taking place? The author wants feeedback on the piece, but would he need to edit it?

Looking forward to your comments!

Perfect