should erotica must hava theme?

[944490991]

after shot is emptiness, and so should we add a little something to work the story more meaningful point?

 

[sr71plt]

Erotica is too free and pleasurable to have to deal with "shoulds." Write it as you please.

 

[944490991]

i just want a discuss together,you know,the good story is too less now.wan,Thousand law again is common.i am so discontented with these

 

[sr71plt]

I would think that the first step in any such discussion would be to take an English course.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

If his posts are as good as his prose he'll be a LIT star.

 

[Stella_Omega]

after shot is emptiness, and so should we add a little something to work the story more meaningful point?

I always do. The rule of a satisfying story is that something changes by the end. In the kind of erotic story I want to read-- the sex is what brings about the change.

 

[kitten00]

I don't to it necessarily should have a theme, but works of literary merit use them as a basic tool to connect the piece as a whole-you certainly
dont need one, as long as your writing is up to par!K

 

[glenbrown69]

Well, I don't like to read a porn script.

I need to know at least something about the characters and the reasons behind the sex. I just don't connect with the story otherwise. There doesn't necessarily have to be a theme, but there needs to be something that makes it a story and not just a simple they fucked for no credible reason.

On a side note though, if you are thinking of submitting something to Literotica I would advise you to get it edited first because your English doesn't seem that great. There's nothing wrong with having bad English in general, but in a site that is driven by English it isn't to your advantage if your stories contain bad English.

 

[Stella_Omega]

There are thousands of stories here in other languages. I imagine OP is planning to write in their own. and there are forums here in other languages as well, sort of general board things. But the only writer's discussion forums per se, are English language.

 

[glenbrown69]

Oh, I didn't realise.

Well, in an alteration of my post:

If you decide to upload your story in English, you should get it edited first.

 

[sr71plt]

But the only writer's discussion forums per se, are English language.

Oh? What are those seven other language discussion forums listed below? Sorry, but I find it impossible to have a serious discussion of writing technique in English with someone who is illiterate in English. It just seems a particular waste of time for all.

 

[PoppingTom]

There are thousands of stories here in other languages. I imagine OP is planning to write in their own. and there are forums here in other languages as well, sort of general board things. But the only writer's discussion forums per se, are English language.

The Germans got a writer's discussion froum, too

 

[Stella_Omega]

The Germans got a writer's discussion froum, too

I stand corrected!