She got what she ask for

[lexium]

A young woman has the desire to be dominated by her lovers. She becomes their new toy. To reach her ultimate high, she begs them to pinch, bit, spank, and handle her with disregard. She is taking beyond her own desires when she meet Ray, a long haired man with piercing eyes and the drive to control her.

Ray's imagination takes the young woman on an adventure that she would never forget, if she lives through it.

 

[BlackSnake]

Will this be some type of DOM story?

 

[Chicklet]

sounds almost like she'd be the top in the relationship, telling them what to do to her.

do you want it to turn into a type of nonconsent story where she's taken virtually against her will to get her secret desires?

maybe her bf or hubby hires ray to do those things to her to fulfill her fetish.

 

[BlackSnake]

Lex, where are you going with this one? We need a little more to go one. It's a bit vague...

 

[Svenskaflicka]

if she lives through it.

Sounds like snuff to me.

 

[Guest]

sounds almost like she'd be the top in the relationship, telling them what to do to her.

do you want it to turn into a type of nonconsent story where she's taken virtually against her will to get her secret desires?

maybe her bf or hubby hires ray to do those things to her to fulfill her fetish.

Ahhhh, another "topping from the bottom", eh? Sounds good! I think you'd be very good at writing this, Chicklet, and I love all that you've added here.

Also, maybe it's what she's always wanted...or she thought it was...and it goes a bit "out of control" and past her original fantasies. That's where the "non consent" could come into play!

 

[HandsomeHunk]

submissive

she should be taken to a swing club...and blindfolded....

 

[Guest]

Blindfolds are always nice!

It reminds me of a time when a Friend of mine set up a "small sex party" for me. Including Him and I, there were 4 Men and 4 women. The other C/couples were swinger friends of my Friend and T/they all engaged in D/s as well.

I was the center of attention of this party. It was, after all, set up for me and was my fantasy. I was blindfolded in the hallway on the outside of the hotel room and then brought into the room. I trusted my Friend 100% (and still do), so I had no inhibitions that day.

I won't steal this thread to go on. Hell, if I really wanted to, I could write this up and submit it to Lit.

 

[lexium]

Lex, where are you going with this one? We need a little more to go one. It's a bit vague...

This young woman was satisfied for the first time when she met her boyfriend. At first, he treated her nice, took her places, and bought her nice things. As their relationship continued, her boyfriend became distant. The only time they would have sex is when he was in the mood, and then only enough for him to cum.

Frustrated, she lashed out at him. Insisted that he should satisfy her when they have sex.

Not being use to a woman yelling at him, the boyfriend slapped her to the floor calling her a "horny-bitch".

"You want to be fucked, then I'll fuck you," he said angrily. He reached down grabbing the elastic waist ban of her pants pulling them off her hips. The force in which he pulled them caused her legs to be lifted into the air. With her pants, her panties also were pulled off.

The boyfriend took hold of one of her ankles and dragged her across the floor into the kitchen. He grabbed the first thing he could find, which turned out to be a broom.

"Here's something for you.... you nasty whore," he shouted. He jabbed the handle of the broom between her thighs....

 

[BlackSnake]

Abusive boyfriend. Let me guess, he fucks her with the broom and she cum. I don't know

 

[Guest]

Well... If that's the case, there's nothing erotic about abuse!

You not talking to me anymore, BlackSnake?

 

[Screaming Grace]

Well... If that's the case, there's nothing erotic about abuse!

You not talking to me anymore, BlackSnake?

way to go BB

And they think I need help

 

[lexium]

Abusive boyfriend. Let me guess, he fucks her with the broom and she cum. I don't know

The boyfriend's brutial assault on the young girl put her in the hospital. After two weeks of laying in bed, she was allow to returned home. Her doctors and the police advised her not to return to her boyfriend.

When she arrived home by taxi, her boyfriend was not there. She felt weak, but she decided to clean up the mess created during her absence. The massive amount of cleaning left her exhausted. She took a bath and laid on the sofa to rest.

When she opened her eyes, her boyfriend and two of his good friends were standing over her. She could tell by the way they were looking at her that they had not come to check on her well being.....

 

[Guest]

way to go BB

And they think I need help

Well, don't take this the wrong way, but anyone in an abusive relationship does. It's not healthy. And, obviously, someone could wind up dead. Then you've had the ultimate, but not good, escape.

There is a huge difference between Sadomasochism and abuse. I've dated some extreme Sadists and even They had love in Their hearts.

 

[lexium]

The young woman's boyfriend pulled his cock from his pants and began stroking it. The young woman, Lynn (sounds ok) sat up on the sofa holding her robe closed. She had a very good idea that their intension was to have sex with her.

The young woman's boyfriend, Mike took the back of her head and force it to his cock. She felt it wasn't anything she could do, but to give in to his will.

Lynn opened her mouth and took in Mike's cock. Mike's friends Bob, a thin white man and Tyrone, a muscular black man, began pawing her heavy tits and sliding their hands up her naked thighs.

Mike pushed his cock back and forth, fucking Lynn's mouth as Tyrone retrieved one of her full breasts from her robe. Bob had made his way to her tender cunt and inserted a couple of his finger.

"Drink all of my cum, slut!" Mike ordered as he released his thick wad.

Bob and Tyrone stood back to allow Mike to feed Lynn his sperm. The two men removed their clothes to get ready for some action....

 

[BlackSnake]

How is she begging to be treated this way?

 

[Svenskaflicka]

How is she begging to be treated this way?

How is ANY woman "begging" to be treated this way? Sorry lexium, no offense, but this sounds like a bad idea to me. Violence and abuse and gang rape is NOT sexy.

 

[BlackSnake]

How is ANY woman "begging" to be treated this way? Sorry lexium, no offense, but this sounds like a bad idea to me. Violence and abuse and gang rape is NOT sexy.

I have to agree. I'm one of those idoits that get into all kinds of trouble when their boyfriends decide he wants push them around.

Hopefully, you intend on showing some kind of twisted desire on her part.

 

[Svenskaflicka]

"Twisted is the word, said Bill.
The word is twisted, said Bull."

I don't like stories where women get abused, and I DEFINITELY don't like stories where the woman likes getting abused, because there are always some morons out there that will think that that's the way all women in the world must be like.

 

[BlackSnake]

"Twisted is the word, said Bill.
The word is twisted, said Bull."

I don't like stories where women get abused, and I DEFINITELY don't like stories where the woman likes getting abused, because there are always some morons out there that will think that that's the way all women in the world must be like.

We can stop writing because some jerk can't distinguish fantasy from reality.

 

[pop_54]

Yep

We can stop writing because some jerk can't distinguish fantasy from reality.

I have to agree BS, we can't be the world's keepers and write fairey stories all the time.

Fact of life is, some women do like being abused sexually, they volunteer for it, I can't get heavy into BDSM myself but I know girls who love a bit of it in real life, and guys of course.

I've actually written a story along the lines of lex's fantasy here, just about to give it a happy ending hopefully when I can get my brain round the final chapter.

pops.........

 

[Screaming Grace]

How is ANY woman "begging" to be treated this way? Sorry lexium, no offense, but this sounds like a bad idea to me. Violence and abuse and gang rape is NOT sexy.

Sorry Svenskaflicka but you have to live it to see what joy it brings

Grace

 

[Svenskaflicka]

Sorry Svenskaflicka but you have to live it to see what joy it brings

Grace

I was beaten by a guy once. No joy. I beat him back.

Ah, well, as long as no-one tries to force me to do something I don't like, I'll not try to stop BDSM-ers from having their fun. Just be careful!

 

[lexium]

Lynn gulped down the tangy thick cream, but her eyes couldn't stray from Tyrone's long thick cock.

It was easily the biggest cock she had ever seen. She began to trimmer as he stroked the long thick rod.

 

[RisiaSkye]

Either get this on track as a Story Idea, or let it die. This is just a weird version of exhibitionism, the posting of little snippets from a possible story.

Thank you,
RS
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