creativeboyinspring
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Hello all.
I think this will be one of the next stories I write, but wanted to see if anyone had thoughts about it. This is the first time I've ever shared an idea so publicly, so it feels weird.
To be upfront, I write noncon and I go after the feeling of humiliation first, and then all other kinks first. You will probably notice this from my writings.
I know it is somewhat dark, so if such topics or ideas aren't your thing, please do not read.
Story would be about a young woman and man as they walk home from college. I'm picturing them as around 20 years old. They take the public bus to their college, and since they have the same last class today, they ride home together as they live somewhat close to each other. They would NOT be a couple, just really good friends. These two would be average people, so not sex fiends or whores or anything like that. Just normal with normal sex lives. Granted, the boy does have a crush on her, but she's made it clear she isn't interested, and does her best never to lead him on.
As they walk, they have to go through a forest trail which is the way to her neighborhood. Normally the boy walks her to the trail and then leaves her to go his way home. But today, there's a very bad man on the trail. He would step in front of them, looking fierce and scary, telling them how much trouble they are in. The bad man would go on to say how he's going to beat up the boy and then fuck the girl over and over again.
The girl would be defiant, prepared to fight, but the boy wouldn't. He would be insanely scared, revealing his true colors of being a coward. The boy would then grab the girl's arms and hold them behind her, surprising her. He would go on to make a deal with the bad man in which he'll help him fuck his friend, as long as the bad man doesn't hurt him. The bad man would laughingly agree, telling the girl what great friends she has. Making it 2 against 1 so to speak.
The boy would then be the one that strips her naked and ties her up. As he does, he begs her to just go with it and get mad at her when she struggles or cursess at him. She would be so shocked and surprised that she just sort of does as she is told or is easily made to do it, letting her friend betray her. Soon she would be naked and tied up to become helpless. That's when the fun begins as the bad man starts to use her, but makes the friend help for added humiliation. For an example, at one point she would be tied on her hands and knees, to which she has to perform oral on the bad man. As she does, her friend has to spank her the entire time and call her a whore. Or as another example, the bad man might be fucking her from behind, but he makes the friend slap her breasts or rub her clit as he does.
The end would be that the bad man just leaves once he is finished. Just leaves the two friends there, knowing the relationship has been damaged, especially as she's cummed so many times she forgot the number. Not to mention that the friend would have cum by watching her get taken by the bad man.
Thoughts?
I think this will be one of the next stories I write, but wanted to see if anyone had thoughts about it. This is the first time I've ever shared an idea so publicly, so it feels weird.
To be upfront, I write noncon and I go after the feeling of humiliation first, and then all other kinks first. You will probably notice this from my writings.
I know it is somewhat dark, so if such topics or ideas aren't your thing, please do not read.
Story would be about a young woman and man as they walk home from college. I'm picturing them as around 20 years old. They take the public bus to their college, and since they have the same last class today, they ride home together as they live somewhat close to each other. They would NOT be a couple, just really good friends. These two would be average people, so not sex fiends or whores or anything like that. Just normal with normal sex lives. Granted, the boy does have a crush on her, but she's made it clear she isn't interested, and does her best never to lead him on.
As they walk, they have to go through a forest trail which is the way to her neighborhood. Normally the boy walks her to the trail and then leaves her to go his way home. But today, there's a very bad man on the trail. He would step in front of them, looking fierce and scary, telling them how much trouble they are in. The bad man would go on to say how he's going to beat up the boy and then fuck the girl over and over again.
The girl would be defiant, prepared to fight, but the boy wouldn't. He would be insanely scared, revealing his true colors of being a coward. The boy would then grab the girl's arms and hold them behind her, surprising her. He would go on to make a deal with the bad man in which he'll help him fuck his friend, as long as the bad man doesn't hurt him. The bad man would laughingly agree, telling the girl what great friends she has. Making it 2 against 1 so to speak.
The boy would then be the one that strips her naked and ties her up. As he does, he begs her to just go with it and get mad at her when she struggles or cursess at him. She would be so shocked and surprised that she just sort of does as she is told or is easily made to do it, letting her friend betray her. Soon she would be naked and tied up to become helpless. That's when the fun begins as the bad man starts to use her, but makes the friend help for added humiliation. For an example, at one point she would be tied on her hands and knees, to which she has to perform oral on the bad man. As she does, her friend has to spank her the entire time and call her a whore. Or as another example, the bad man might be fucking her from behind, but he makes the friend slap her breasts or rub her clit as he does.
The end would be that the bad man just leaves once he is finished. Just leaves the two friends there, knowing the relationship has been damaged, especially as she's cummed so many times she forgot the number. Not to mention that the friend would have cum by watching her get taken by the bad man.
Thoughts?
