Sharing for the first time

[steamy_word_guy]

Hi all:
Well, I've been a closet writer of short stories for some time. In fact, and this is major honest time, I compiled stories back in the day when I'd chat online with women for hours shaping scenarios.

I've finally started to post some of them in my own blog. They are pretty quick to the point and I don't claim to be a great writer, but I try to paint a vivid picture and I don't really limit what words I use.

I'd love to hear feedback here or comments on my blog and I thank you in advance.

http://steamywordguy.wordpress.com

All my best.

 

[The_Fractal_King]

I don't think you're supposed to ask for feedback on stuff outside of Lit.

In any event feedback here is usually about stories that have a plot. That seems to be mainly stroke (which is fine) so there's not a ton of criticism to be given. Reading a story that is in first person talking to the audience feels extremely awkward to most people.

 

[Guest]

I don't think you're supposed to ask for feedback on stuff outside of Lit.

In any event feedback here is usually about stories that have a plot. That seems to be mainly stroke (which is fine) so there's not a ton of criticism to be given. Reading a story that is in first person talking to the audience feels extremely awkward to most people.

Yep. Gotta go with FK on this one.

We love to help each other out with our stories but generally those stories are posted on Literotica.

Why not submit some work here? You can always put them here and on your blog.

This way you'll get more feedback from writers and readers.

 

[where]

Agree with what Fractal and SSSarah said. If you do post on here though, make them longer cause they were waaaaay to short to get me off