Shameless plea for your attention

[peachykeen]

Hi folks!

My story "Moving Violation" posted this morning and it is the first story I've done that is meant to explore some 'control' issues. I wanted to walk on that borderline between consent and non-consent to an extent and I am curious to hear from others as to how I did with that. Any feedback is entirely welcome, I know we all have only so much time in a given day so I appreciate it very much.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=58892

Cheers and thanks!
peachykeen@literotica.org

 

[CNDPhD]

outstanding

mmmm god that is a great story.. I loved it...

perhaps you would like to read one of mine

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=58711

all the best

CND

 

[ladyphoenix]

Issues of control...

Most people tell me that all of my stories have elements of control, so this was right up my alley, so to speak.
LOVED IT.
You write VERY well, darlin, I gave you a five and you have my earnest recommendation!

ladyp

 

[peachykeen]

***blushing*** you are both very kind.

I shall endeavor to check your works in the very near future.

Thank you

 

[Guest]

Nice story if i do say so myself

 

[taliesen]

well done

Yes, Very nice.

will watch for future work.

 

[AngelAmanda]

I want to see the Video

With most Police departments having automatic videos running a follow up story about her and the video migth be interesting??

I LIKED the story but wonder how likely is that to happen? Have any girls out there been taken by a cop in a ticket pull over?

 

[peachykeen]

thanks everyone

appreciate all of your comments. hadn't been planning a follow up but an idea for one has latched itself to my brain so look for Breaking and Entering in about a week or two. Oh and Amanda I looooove the video suggestion. So maybe a third eventually as well. Will have to move the whole thing into Novels section but OK!!!

 

[Couture]

Cool title, but it's already in use.

Breaking and Entering

 

[peachykeen]

Damn, I realy wanted to use that too. But daaaaaamn Couture that's a hot one! Well too bad this idea isn't going to go awayso I will have to go with The Break In or something similar.

Damn it couture, you've got me all horny and now I've got to go wake up the boy and get his breakfast ready. Damn damn damn.