Sexually Suggestive Scenes

[RicoLouis]

I am writing a story currently and the first chapter isn't so much about sex but has five girls flaunting the bodies in sexually suggestive ways. Skimpy clothing and such. As well as sexually suggestive scenes which put dirty thoughts into the main charcthers head which are fun to write for me since I like more stories a bit playful. Love to see what others can come up with.

Example.

He walked outside onto the back patio as he froze watching the scantly clad girl laying out in the sunchair in her string bikini. Her hard nipples poking throgh her top. The bottoms hugging her pussy just enough to show off a bit of camel toe. Her eyes closed as she raised a cherry red popsicle to her lips as she licked at the tip of it with her tongue. He could fill a stering in his loins as he watched her tongue lap at it lick the head of a cock. Her lips parted as she took the popsicle deep into her mouth. Slowly sliding in and out. Back and forth. Damn he wished that was his cock. Slowly she pulled it back out as some of the juice trickled down her chin and dripping onto her breast as if it had exploded in her mouth. She reached down whipping it off her breast giving them a little jiggle before she looked up to see him standing there.

"Hey can you do me?" She asked as she leaned over sideways showing her nice barley covered ass as her bottoms had sunk in a bit between her cheeks.

"What?" He asked. Half ready to drop his bottems right then and there.

"Can you out some lotion on me?" She said sitting back up holding a bottle of lotion.

 

[mythtrav16]

So, are you asking for other people to suggest some scene ideas for you, or are you asking for a critique on what you just posted?

If it's the latter, then it's very good, apart from the spelling errors, which are kind of distracting. Try running it through some software with a spell-check and then proofread it and you should do well.

 

[RicoLouis]

just some ideas for scenes, like to see what others could come up with.

 

[Carnevil9]

Popsicles are great, as you've already used. So are ice cream cones and bananas!

Exercising is a good tease scene: pumping at a stationary bike, or a stair-climber. Sweat pouring down, breath coming in gasps, wetness between the breasts or shoulder blades, etc.

Or, as anyone who's seen "Cool Hand Luke" knows (or "Wild Things"), chicks washing a car in their bikinis!

 

[RicoLouis]

Workout

Exercising is a good tease scene: pumping at a stationary bike, or a stair-climber. Sweat pouring down, breath coming in gasps, wetness between the breasts or shoulder blades, etc.

Like this one. Add a little stretching before hand. But you forgot the upper thigh cramp that needs to be massaged afterwards.

 

[Carnevil9]

Like this one. Add a little stretching before hand. But you forgot the upper thigh cramp that needs to be massaged afterwards.

Exactly! That's the spirit!

Even better, maybe one of them suffers a bit of a swoon, and some mouth-to-mouth is in order......

 

[SweetSusiex]

Lol

great ideas!!!!!!!!!!!

 

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[RicoLouis]

Yes my current story is incest, though they could be used for non incest stories as well by someone else. Great for building up the tension. Such as the lollipop scene.

 

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[RicoLouis]

Thought about a cooking story the other day. Dosen't work for my current story but nice to have an idea on "the back burner" Working in the kitchen together, bodies brushing up against each other. She pops a few buttons on her blouse from the heat. Sucking food off of his finger to see if its right. Her breast jiggling lightly as she stirs and rolls out the food. Just got to figure out what they are cooking,besides the obvious, something with a little alchoal in it maybe?