NotWise
Desert Rat
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I've had some beta readers, all female, complain about the amount of time I spend describing sexual mechanics. "He turned her over, and pushed her legs apart," etc.
My defense has been that I'm a guy. I think that in most relationships guys are responsible for making sex work, while women want it to work. The mechanical details might have more meaning for me then maybe they do for most women.
That said, how much do readers (male or female) need to know about the mechanics of what's going on? The common acts are, well, common. We've done them, and we know how they work.
Do you describe them in pulsating detail? I think some readers want that, even for common acts, but I don't know.
My defense has been that I'm a guy. I think that in most relationships guys are responsible for making sex work, while women want it to work. The mechanical details might have more meaning for me then maybe they do for most women.
That said, how much do readers (male or female) need to know about the mechanics of what's going on? The common acts are, well, common. We've done them, and we know how they work.
Do you describe them in pulsating detail? I think some readers want that, even for common acts, but I don't know.