sexual clue

[intriguess]

ms black is murdered after an evening entertaining guests

Mrs. White her widowed housekeeper who is also an adept pussy licker

Ms Peacock old college room mate and lover

Miss Scarlett her daughter (incest if you'd like)

Proffesseor Plum her old proffesseor, her daughter's new professeor, potential father of miss scarlett (possible scarlett is fucking him for a grade as well)

Doctor Green, ex lover who's education she funded, also a potential father of miss scarlett

Mr Mustard, her lawyer and current lover

Throughout the night she entertains her guests and is found naked tied to her bed in the morning dead.

They were brought there because she wanted to let them know they were all in her will.

Motives vary from being Scarlett's father, blackmail, or jealousy

I'm interested in writing it but wondered if anyone had any ideas or thoughts on what could be done to improve the storyline.

 

[Puppi]

Are you changing the occupation of some of these people for your story, or do you not remembe them from the game/movie?

 

[intriguess]

chanind their occupations to better fit the story, i just couldn't think of why she would know a colonel....so I decided that she funded the doctor's medical schooling and now he wants to get married and leave their involvement behind...of course she is sleeping with her lawyer, so she doesn't really care but he doesn't know that....

It fits better this way in my mind, besides I'm having Ms. Black killed instead of Mr. Black so I figured other changes could be made.

 

[Vincent E]

Scarlett wants to marry Mustard, but she can't as long as her mother stands in the way; moreover after she marries Mustard she can kill him and claim two shares of the inheritance instead of just one. After carrying out the murder Scarlett plants incriminating evidence in White's room to make it seem as if after all those years of eating Black's pussy, White thinks that she is entitled to a windfall right now. After suspicion falls on White, Scarlett closes ranks with Green to conceal the fact that Plum is her father; as Green is a doctor he can confirm with a bloodtest. Conspiring to lead the others to believe that Green is Scarlett's father they aggresively pursue the prosecution of White and complete the frame. The whole plan comes crashing down when Peacock, knowing that Scarlett and Green are sleeping together as she is in the next room, tells Plum that Black had confided to her in college that she knew Plum was the father of her child; Peacock has no real information, but is instead plotting herself as she desires to be sleeping with Green who is currenlt plotting with Scarlett. As the deceit is revealed White seeks the legal advice of an unknowing Mustard, they reveal Scarlett's plan for him (I'll leave the details to you) and White and Mustard claim Scarlett's and Green's shares of the inheritance since you cannot collect if you are a murderer or accessory after the fact. Peacock laments the conviction of Green while Plum just basically fucks off with his share of the estate.

 

[Bob Waters]

It was Col. Mustard in the billiard room with the vibrating butt plug! lmao

 

[intriguess]

thanks...but i didn't need a complete plot, in fact i hadn't decided who the killer was......geesh, why don't you write it. I justed wanted a few thoughts or ideas. Not a complete override of my own ideas.

*throws hands in air*

just when I was thinking of having this story span a lot of categories.

 

[Vincent E]

Sorry.

I guess I got a little carried away there.

 

[Chicklet]

It was Col. Mustard in the billiard room with the vibrating butt plug! lmao

lol

but, hey, this sort of reminds me of the idea for a "sexual mystery" type thing. Like, you know how people go off to places and do those things where they act out a murder and the guests have to figure out who did it? We had an idea for a sexual type one...i dont' remember much...somebody dig up the post, i'm a moron.

chicklet

(yes...do my dirty work...mwahahahaha)