Sex with a Stranger

[indianbarbie86]

Was thinking about a young female goes for a walks home alone at night and a man suddenly comes up behind her and pulls her into a dark alley where she lets him finger her and penetrate her but all this time she doesn't see who he is... Lol what you think?

 

[bisexplicit]

Some guy I don't know pulls me into an alley, and I'm going to let him penetrate me?

Sorry, I just am not seeing the realism...

 

[fogbank]

The only way it could possibly work is if you spend a lot of time going into the woman's mind (more than just 'oh, I am so horny and if I don't get molested by the time I get home, I'm going to explode'), exploring exactly why she's reached a point of such vulnerability that she's willing to allow herself to be violated. It needs to be really vivid or personal or absurd to stand out from all the other similar stories out there. I remember a story (I think it was Anais Nin, though it's been probably ten years since I read it) about a woman who allows herself to be penetrated in the middle of a crowd at a public execution. That had all three elements: it was vivid, it was personal, it was absurd. It wasn't particularly plausible, but that really didn't matter to the story, and it wouldn't necessarily matter here.

 

[Fantasies-only]

The only way it could possibly work is if you spend a lot of time going into the woman's mind (more than just 'oh, I am so horny and if I don't get molested by the time I get home, I'm going to explode'), exploring exactly why she's reached a point of such vulnerability that she's willing to allow herself to be violated. It needs to be really vivid or personal or absurd to stand out from all the other similar stories out there. I remember a story (I think it was Anais Nin, though it's been probably ten years since I read it) about a woman who allows herself to be penetrated in the middle of a crowd at a public execution. That had all three elements: it was vivid, it was personal, it was absurd. It wasn't particularly plausible, but that really didn't matter to the story, and it wouldn't necessarily matter here.

I think he has to do a little more than that.
He doesn't have to reveal the man's identity (the best romance novels are built on this premice, only not as graphic), but we wanna know what drives him to do this.
Is he a serial rapest, a copy cat molester?
What was it that triggered this behaviour, even before this girl?
A public or voyeuristic eliment would also make the story, and flush out the characters' personalities.

 

[Texguy84]

Maybe she has gotten into some kind of group-sex arrangement with her SO and his friends, and they agree to a game where one or more of the members of the group will ambush her at some point during the day and have their way with her. She knows it will happen, she doesn't know when it will happen, where it will happen, or who will make it happen, just that she will be ready and willing when it DOES happen. Perhaps this necessitates her keeping "warmed up" all day, whenever she gets a moment to herself?

 

[bisexplicit]

Maybe she has gotten into some kind of group-sex arrangement with her SO and his friends, and they agree to a game where one or more of the members of the group will ambush her at some point during the day and have their way with her. She knows it will happen, she doesn't know when it will happen, where it will happen, or who will make it happen, just that she will be ready and willing when it DOES happen. Perhaps this necessitates her keeping "warmed up" all day, whenever she gets a moment to herself?

But, to have a twist, maybe in the end - the guy who she goes into the alley with isn't the guy she's supposed to.

 

[emap]

Texguy that is a good idea on why she would let him do her, except there is a problem, there would be a safeword that would let her know it's not some random rapist out to get his jollies or one of those HIV positive people who thinks they should infect anybody they can.

I mean personally if some guy grabbed me and tried to drag me into a dark alley I'd be screaming bloody murder and wailing on him with fists and my purse until either he lets go or someone comes and helps, well ok or he kills me, cause there's no way some guy is going to penetrate me, I was stupid when i was younger, I know better now.

 

[Fantasies-only]

But, to have a twist, maybe in the end - the guy who she goes into the alley with isn't the guy she's supposed to.

I've got an idea.
What if this "club" she belonged to went co-ed, and another girl did this to her in some kind of disguise.
What if she liked exparimenting even after the rape, and couldn't stop her urges.
At this point, the rest of the club is told to only allow females to do it with her, and the next one that molests her is her sister.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Role play!

So, a gal is off for a walk or jog. Be it city setting, with an alley near by, or either rural or urban park. Gal is grabbed, hand placed over her mouth so she cannot scream. Different twists based on personal preference. Either she's too week to break loose, or she is rather athletic and somehow this assailant knows her moves and can counter affect them.

She's bent over a park bench? A short dumpster? Forced to all fours? Swung around, leaning against whatever, so she can see her attacker? Surprise surprise!! The assailant is her boyfriend! Is this a surprise to her? Do they enjoy spicing up their sex lives and dare to try bold role plays?

 

[Fantasies-only]

Role play!

So, a gal is off for a walk or jog. Be it city setting, with an alley near by, or either rural or urban park. Gal is grabbed, hand placed over her mouth so she cannot scream. Different twists based on personal preference. Either she's too week to break loose, or she is rather athletic and somehow this assailant knows her moves and can counter affect them.

She's bent over a park bench? A short dumpster? Forced to all fours? Swung around, leaning against whatever, so she can see her attacker? Surprise surprise!! The assailant is her boyfriend! Is this a surprise to her? Do they enjoy spicing up their sex lives and dare to try bold role plays?

Interesting take, but a bit boring to base a whole story around.
That sounds more like an introduction to a much bigger plot, such as a swinger's club.

Yes, all kinds of things can happen here, and I don't mean a normal swinger's club, but a more kinki version.
S&M, hand jobs and cock sucking, multiple orgies, etc.
I think I like my lesbian version better, not that I'd read it anyway.

 

[hyulhyulhyul]

Nin's Erotic Story

The only way it could possibly work is if you spend a lot of time going into the woman's mind (more than just 'oh, I am so horny and if I don't get molested by the time I get home, I'm going to explode'), exploring exactly why she's reached a point of such vulnerability that she's willing to allow herself to be violated. It needs to be really vivid or personal or absurd to stand out from all the other similar stories out there. I remember a story (I think it was Anais Nin, though it's been probably ten years since I read it) about a woman who allows herself to be penetrated in the middle of a crowd at a public execution. That had all three elements: it was vivid, it was personal, it was absurd. It wasn't particularly plausible, but that really didn't matter to the story, and it wouldn't necessarily matter here.

The scene from Nin's "The Woman In The Dunes" among a collection of vignettes called "Little Birds" is an erotic depiction of "frotage" ,the kind of groping that occurs in crowded places like packed subway cars or elevators, throngs of milling people, etc. going a step further and ending in penetration.

I prefer this over the traumatic groping on the subway car in William Styron's "Sophie's Choice".



"There she stood, pressed against the rope, watching with fascination and terror. Then a stirring in the crowd pushed her away from her position. Still, she could see by standing on her toes. People were crushing her from all sides. The prisoner was brought in with his eyes blindfolded. The hangman stood by, waiting. Two policemen held the man and slowly led him up the stairs to the scaffold.

At this moment she became aware of someone pressing against her far more eagerly than necessary. In the trembling, excited condition she was in, the pressure was not disagreeable. Her body was in a fever. Anyway, she could scarcely move, so pinned was she to the spot by the curious crowd.

She wore a white blouse and a skirt that buttoned all the way down the side as was the fashion then - a short and a blouse through which one could see her rosy underwear and guess at the shape of her breasts.

Two hands encircled her waist, and she distinctly felt a man's body, his desire hard against her ass. She held her breath. Her eyes were fixed on the man who was about to be hanged, which made her body painfully nervous, and at the same time the hands reached for her breasts and pressed upon them.

She felt dizzy with conflicting sensations. She did not move or turn her head. A hand now sought an opening in the skirt and discovered the buttons. Each button undone by the hand made her gasp with both fear and relief. The hand waited to see if she protested before proceeding to another button. She did not move.

Then, with a dexterity and swiftness she had not expected, the two hands twisted her skirt round so that the opening was at the back. In the heaving crowd, now all she could feel was a penis slowly being slipped into the opening of her skirt.

Her eyes remained fixed on the man who was mounting the scaffold, and with each beat of her heart the penis gained headway. It had traversed the skirt and parted the slit in her panties. How warm and firm and hard it was against her flesh. The condemned man stood on the scaffold now and the noose was put around his neck. The pain of watching him was so great that it made this touch of flesh a relief, a human, warm, consoling thing. It seemed to her then that this penis quivering between her buttocks was something wonderful to hold on to, life, life to hold while death was passing ...

Without saying a word, the Russian bowed his head in the noose. Her body trembled. The penis advanced between the soft folds of her buttocks, pushed its way inexorably into her flesh.

She was palpitating with fear, and it was like the palpitation of desire. As the condemned man was flung into space and death, the penis gave a great leap inside of her, gushing out its warm life.

The crowd crushed the man against her. She almost ceased breathing, and, as her fear became pleasure, wild pleasure at feeling life while a man was dying, she fainted."

Something along these lines would appeal more to me than just having someone grab the female character and start fingering her.

 

[3113]

The scene from Nin's "The Woman In The Dunes" among a collection of vignettes called "Little Birds" is an erotic depiction of "frotage" ,the kind of groping that occurs in crowded places like packed subway cars or elevators, throngs of milling people, etc. going a step further and ending in penetration.

Thank you for quoting that. Now THERE is a mistress of the erotic writing craft. Juxtaposition of sudden death with sudden penetration, feeling most alive while watching death, a connection between two people on so many levels--strangers, but not strangers as sex and death unites. The woman wanting it as much as the man--and therefore ALLOWING it when he ASKS her in that moment of hesitation on his part--because they have connected, however anonymously there at the hanging.

Beautiful.

I think this is what your idea is lacking. Pulling a woman into an alley--be the perpetrator male, female, expected or not, is scary. It can turn off the reader of the story in a second--or turn on a reader that you really, really DON'T want to turn on with such fantasies.

Strangers meeting, having sex, can be very sexy. Step back from the alley, and try to think of something more exciting, more interesting. The sexy guy on a plane...and you step back to join him in that little bathroom? Or the man you see at a gathering, a play and opera...who you decide to join behind a curtain. Or in a bookstore among the stacks.....

On and on. There are many places where a woman can have sex with a sexy stranger outside an alley--and there are many ways for her to decide to have this sex with him--outside of being forced into it.

 

[eroticdan]

interesting.....

thats quite the idea!!!!! any takers yet?

dan