Sex Scences

[destinie21]

Sex Scenes

Yep you guessed it, another exercises. Inspired by the thread .The wonderful sounds that Woman and men make . It seems we all pretty much agree that ooooooo ahhhhhhhh's and any such language is a no no. So I'm here to do yet another show rather than tell exercises. This time write a sex scene including one or both of the character's climaxing.

I'll go first just because I love to be first.

The sound of her breath is no louder than a whisper but to me it's a love song. I take her hand, drawing it to me. Inviting her fingers to answer the ache her call has summoned. She tells me how soft I am as she strokes the fabric of my panties. She moves her palm slowly as she kisses me. I pull her in grasping the back of her neck as she keeps me strung out along the jagged peaks of climax. She opens her mouth tasting me more deeply now. Her breathing is faster, and so is mine as her fingers press gently. Her fingertips push me closer to the edge.

"Please stop teasing..."
She hasn't been teasing her touch has been direct playing every note of our symphony. She knows what I mean. Her hand slips beneath the material cupping and stroking. Now she's teasing, retribution for the false accusation.
I'm begging her now and she fills me. Warm soft supple strokes from her knowing fingers. She knows how close I am she finds those places that make me tingle and pant her name like an incantation. The movement of her fingers makes me rigid. I want to be fluid for her but I can't help myself. My body is tight and shining with sweat every muscle tensed. She hold me close and pushes me over the edge.

Okay that was right off the cuff do what you will be as brief as you can

ps: forgive my terrible spelling.

 

[Jenny _S]

Just for you, Des, my friend...

You lay there on the bed with your arms outstretched. The smile on your face showed how much she had missed me during the weeks I had been gone. Her eyes glistened as I moved to sit next to her on the bed.

My hand moved to the soft curve of your side, feeling the slick fabric of your nightgown. Your hand moved to the side of my face then to cup the back of my neck as she pulled my lips to yours.

“I have missed you so, Donna,” she said softly as her hand stroked my shoulder and moved downward to pass lightly over my hardened nipple.

“I have missed you too, my love.” I kissed your cheek and let my tongue roam down the side of your neck, feeling your body stiffen with wanting. Cupping your breast my mouth moved downward to feel it, taste it, become amazed at how quickly it became hard between my lips.

You threw your head back as she her fingers clutched at my hair desiring more. As she arched her back I bite the erect nipple in my mouth causing a moan to come from deep in your throat. My hand moved between her thighs, my fingers dipped into the warm wetness I found.

Withdrawing my fingers I allow you to taste the juices on them. You smile and push my face farther down over your mound and into your valley of pleasure. I reach up and turn off the light as you lock your thighs around my neck.

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Morning's first light barely penetrated the drawn curtains. The weak rays of the false dawn leaving only vague impressions of the room beyond the big canopy bed. Fran snuggled closer to Ginger's soft body, feeling her stir in her sleep. Fran looked down on her features and smiled. Something about her when she slept was just captivating.

Last night's lovemaking had been fierce and her body still ached slightly from the violence of their coupling. This morning she felt only a gentle need and to do something special for Ginger. With great care she eased the coverlet and silk sheets back, slowly exposing Ginger's lush curves. Even at forty-five she was breathtakingly beautiful and Fran felt the stirrings of her passion rise with each inch of her lover's skin that was exposed.

With the utmost care Fran slipped between Ginger's thighs and positioned herself to deliver the morning's surprise. Ginger's sex was still damp from last night and exuded a sensual musk that quickly had Fran's mouth watering. She pressed her face into her lover's pungent nest and began to lap at the satiny folds. Ginger groaned and tangled her hands in Fran's dark tresses. Her sleepy groan transformed into a soft moan as she realized what was happening.

Fran's hand slipped under her own body and between her legs. Her fingers urgently stroking as her tongue lashed the pebble between her lips. In moments they were reduced to a moaning, sighing mass of thrashing limbs and wildly merging bodies. Moans and sighs blended with the liquid sounds of passion.

Ginger tensed, arched her back and barked in pleasure as her orgasm took her. Fran felt like a bottle of champagne that was being shaken and shaken. She felt the tenseness in her limbs rise to a point that was on the razor's edge between unbearable pleasure and agony. The dam burst without warning and she screamed into her lover's wet sex as red waves of pleasure assailed her mind.

By the time dawn's rays illuminated the room enough to see the face of the old grandfather clock they were asleep, nestled in each other's arms. Morning could wait a while longer.

 

[wornoutkeyboard]

Morning's first light barely penetrated the drawn curtains. The weak rays of the false dawn leaving only vague impressions of the room beyond the big canopy bed. Fran snuggled closer to Ginger's soft body, feeling her stir in her sleep. Fran looked down on her features and smiled. Something about her when she slept was just captivating. ............

Hey Colly... I've been waiting to read your writing since you always say you aren't going to post it...lol.

Other than the fact that I always hate the word "coupling" (personal pet peeve...no reflection on your skills).... I think you are a great writer!

You should give yourself more credit girl!

~WOK

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Hey Wok,

I don't mind trying these short exercises. I actually got brave and put a story up in the SDC for discussion. Still not sure that was the best thing for my fagile ego

I appreciate your compliments, means a lot coming from you

-Colly

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Just for you, Des, my friend...

You lay there on the bed with your arms outstretched. The smile on your face showed how much she had missed me during the weeks I had been gone. Her eyes glistened as I moved to sit next to her on the bed.

My hand moved to the soft curve of your side, feeling the slick fabric of your nightgown. Your hand moved to the side of my face then to cup the back of my neck as she pulled my lips to yours.

Jeez, Jenny! Her, she, you, it... Who's doing what to whom?

---dr.M.

 

[MathGirl]

Re: Sex Scenes

This time write a sex scene including one or both of the character's climaxing.

"I kiked down the dor and........." Oh, never mind.
MG

 

[CWatson]

Re: Re: Sex Scenes

Originally posted by MathGirl
"I kiked down the dor and........." Oh, never mind.

For no apparent reason, that just sent me into spasms of giggling. *heehee*


~CWatson
(contributing nothing on-topic )

 

[raphy]

Okay, MG's made me laugh two days in a row, now.

 

[oggbashan]

I am staying out of this exercise. I write too many stories with too few sex scenes to waste my pathetic repertoire of descriptions of coupling on an exercise.

If I could write sex scenes easily I'd write a story to go round them.

Why don't I copy and paste my sex scenes with search and replace for the names? Perhaps that's cheating.

If I copied and pasted some of DurtGurl's scenes - my ratings would soon change. Could I live with her grammar? No. I would have to commit seppuku if I copied DurtGurl's grammar.

Og

 

[Jenny _S]

Jeez, Jenny! Her, she, you, it... Who's doing what to whom?

---dr.M.

LMAO... rereading that is sounds like a pile, doesn't it?
That's what happens when you do it off the cuff.

 

[Dirty Slut]

I'll try anything once....

I bit back a scream, actually biting into the pillow as I came, my slit stretched out around his girth quivering the full length of his manhood. So deep into the rapturous moment was I that my voice box was locked up making gurgling sounds as he pounded into me from behind like a rampaging bull. The steady slapping of his belly against my rear nearly drowning in the squishy noises where we were co-joined. His hands on my hips controling my every move as if he were steering us both to heaven added to the screeching of the bedsprings. And all I could gasp out, like an ongoing mantra, was "Uh."

DS

 

[destinie21]

LMAO... rereading that is sounds like a pile, doesn't it?
That's what happens when you do it off the cuff.

S'okay we know you're doing alot of post moving unpacking, and the JesuswheninthehelldidIgetsomuchstuff syndrome is bound to throw you a little off kilter. Besides it's still better than some of the stories out there in litland

 

[destinie21]

LMAO... rereading that is sounds like a pile, doesn't it?
That's what happens when you do it off the cuff.

S'okay we know you're doing alot of post moving unpacking, and the JesuswheninthehelldidIgetsomuchstuff syndrome is bound to throw you a little off kilter. Besides it's still better than some of the stories out there in litland

 

[destinie21]

LMAO... rereading that is sounds like a pile, doesn't it?
That's what happens when you do it off the cuff.

S'okay we know you're doing alot of post moving unpacking, and the JesuswheninthehelldidIgetsomuchstuff syndrome is bound to throw you a little off kilter. Besides it's still better than some of the stories out there in litland

 

[Icingsugar]

I'm with Og on this one. I don't have enough sex in me to post it here.

Ok, that sounded worse than I meant.

What I mean is, I prefer not to waste it outside my writing and my woman.

But I hope you don't mind me studying this thread and steal and borrow shamelessly for future reference.

And Jenny, what's wrong with a pile now?

/Ice - a whole pile all by himself

 

[oggbashan]

MG's masterpiece

"I kiked down the dor and........." Oh, never mind.
MG

Has anyone realised how adaptable MG's classic sentence is?

Here are a few variations:

Gay: "I kiked down the dor and cum in her bruvver."

Bdsm: "I cum thru the dor and kiked in her face."

Erotic Horror: "I kiked the fantom cat, cum thru the wall and cummed in her face."

Og

 

[Pure]

des, that lil piece (exc. pun) wasn't bad and looks quite good among others posted here.

 

[Pure]

Dirty S,

//deep into the rapturous moment //

is all that stuff tongue in cheek or somewhere else?

J.

 

[oggbashan]

More variations on MG's classic theme

Incest "I kiked down the dor and cum in my sisther."

Romance: "I nocked before I kiked ...."

Og

 

[mtnman2003]

Hat's off to you Ogg

Still laughing.........

Mtn

 

[Guest]

Re: More variations on MG's classic theme

Romance: "I nocked before I kiked ...."

Wonderful, perfect wit.

I hope people are catching Gauche's hommage to MG in his H'ween story.

Perdita

 

[Dirty Slut]

is all that stuff tongue in cheek or somewhere else?

Actually, that's as close to the mark as it gets.

DS

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I fronked her blivvid sisklitch with my grappid hozzler again and again until I felt the craspins begin deep down in her flosky behoozin.

“Pave me!” she cried, “You gronny meat wagon! Pave me with that big scootch!”

Her words sent me over the edge and I felt my slazz shasta into her quinding clobstock as she lolled her hoonty blizvitcher desperately up at my gezondling plodstop.

“Ah, you big carlsbad!” she cleemed…


---dr.M.

 

[MathGirl]

“Ah, you big carlsbad!” she cleemed…

Dear Dr M,
Was he cavernous?
MG
Ps. I wish I hadn't said that. Nobody is gonna know what I'm talking about.
Pps. Is your hozzler really grappid? If so, I'm impressed.