sex on a train?
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IN the sex on a train story there should be certain elements to make it exciting. Anyone have stuff to add?
1) passangers opening the door to see if a seat is available and seeing the couple fucking
2) the person who comes around telling you what the next stop is
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IN the sex on a train story there should be certain elements to make it exciting. Anyone have stuff to add?
1) passangers opening the door to see if a seat is available and seeing the couple fucking
2) the person who comes around telling you what the next stop is
Chicklet
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But it seems so much more realistic to have them in one of the little boxes. That's where I was, and that's what I was fantasizing about. You can use characters that are uptight and wouldn't usually do those kinds of things, and use them, because they have the...what's the word...illusion of privacy.
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Instead of in a compartment or rest room what about in an open carriage.
Why go all the way? Why not just mutual masterbation, other people could be in the carriage so they can't get too carried away.
The tease and build up until they arrive at their destination.
I do have a story half written about a train journey across the country but need to finish it.
Why go all the way? Why not just mutual masterbation, other people could be in the carriage so they can't get too carried away.
The tease and build up until they arrive at their destination.
I do have a story half written about a train journey across the country but need to finish it.
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Don't forget the long, phallic symbol, vibrating and screaming into those equally metaphorical tunnels. 
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Sure, you might just be waiting a while sorry.
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My exhibitionist train tale is posted:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=66533
if you like it, vote please
I'd still like more stories in this vein
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=66533
if you like it, vote please
I'd still like more stories in this vein
Ummm, Im from Australia and our trains are similar to the ones you have in US, but totally less crowded and on many occasions are empty.
I have masturbated on a train going to work before, it was an awesome feeling and experience. Maybe, when I get more confident I will write a story about it.
I also can;t wait to loose my virginity, I will also write a story about that.
I have masturbated on a train going to work before, it was an awesome feeling and experience. Maybe, when I get more confident I will write a story about it.
I also can;t wait to loose my virginity, I will also write a story about that.
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TruPlaya said:
don't be shy, how about trying the story of you masturbating on the train? there are lots of volunteer editors willing to help, and the "how to" section of the stories has good tips.
there are a number of train stories, but not that many focused on masturbation.
750 words isn't hard. start by defining "you" as character. Age. Looks, clothing. Purpose of your trip. sexual anxiety .
Para 2- the setting ( train or station- if station, para 3 is you onto train).
Then the others on the car. Who are they? Is it crowded? How close are they to you?
If you want, describe more setting. Is it day or night? If night, is the car lit or dark? Is it raining outside the windows? If so, is the sky filled with lightening occasionally lighting up the car?
why do you decide to jerk off? what inspires you? Are you bold and brazen or discete? who else sees ? what do they do?
Then an ending. You go to sleep, reach destination, go for breakfast in the dining car, whatever.
21 steps. If each occupies an average of 40 words , you have your story.
Please try it.
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sirhugs said:
There's a classic example in Erica Young's Fear of Flying: the zipless fuck, she calls it. It perfectly uses the anonimity of the moment and the surroundings. Good reading, but in terms of great ideas: already discovered
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Re: Re: sex on a train?
Bewtween the Bible, Homer and Shakespeare, a lot of ground has been covered. In fact, Shakesperare ripped of his plots from earlier works. What made his writing classic was the style, and well drawn believable interesting characters.
Fear of Flying was a classic. But after 30 years, no doubt the ideas are ready for fresh approachs.
PaulX35 said:There's a classic example in Erica Young's Fear of Flying: the zipless fuck, she calls it. It perfectly uses the anonimity of the moment and the surroundings. Good reading, but in terms of great ideas: already discovered
Bewtween the Bible, Homer and Shakespeare, a lot of ground has been covered. In fact, Shakesperare ripped of his plots from earlier works. What made his writing classic was the style, and well drawn believable interesting characters.
Fear of Flying was a classic. But after 30 years, no doubt the ideas are ready for fresh approachs.
3days going and 3days cumming
I just took a vacation to La, I went by train. There is so much that you can do. So much erotic trouble you can get into.
Thanks for the story Idea, I'm all on it.
Look for my story in a few days, 3days going and 3days cumming. My trip from Philly to La.
I just took a vacation to La, I went by train. There is so much that you can do. So much erotic trouble you can get into.
Thanks for the story Idea, I'm all on it.
Look for my story in a few days, 3days going and 3days cumming. My trip from Philly to La.
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