Sex Hole

[WickedEve]

Hi Everyone!

I submitted my first poem, Sex Hole, and I'd love to have some feedback on it, please.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=28229

Thanks!

Teasingly,
Wicked Eve

 

[lovetoread]

Read it

It was good. The only thing I want to say is when you repeated I am sex hole. I wanted to put an "a" in the line.


Great work.

 

[WickedEve]

Uhhh! Argh! Eeek! However you scream in cyber space, that's what I'm doing. lol I started to do it that way in the beginning and then I changed my mind. I think I do like it better that way... but I'll probably change my mind again.

Thanks lovetoread!

Teasingly,
Wicked Eve

 

[lovetoread]

Forgot to mention to email me when you post another.

 

[WickedEve]

I'll do that! I should have a new one tomorrow. I noticed that it's quicker to get a poem posted than a story.
I checked to see if you had written anything. Your name should have given me a clue that you are a reader!

Teasingly
Wicked Eve

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=57753

 

[Guest]

I'm a.......

I'm a.......little confused.

Interesting poem.....but I've never met a woman I would simply just consider a "Sex Hole"....truly hope you don't feel that way about you're self. I'd feel bad for you if truly that's how you do feel.........

And on THAT note....I'd appreciate your feedback (and votes) as I'm trying to get a couple of poems onto the board finally...lol.

Here's my link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=39666

To sleep......perchance to dream - William Shakespear

I remain.........

 

[WickedEve]

Okay, what are you confused about?

Don't feel sorry for me. I'm a happy wife, and mother, and a few other things. I'm not a sex hole... full time.

I don't know what to really tell you about this poem. I wrote it because I felt like writing something different. I wrote about some of things I am... or could be... and one of them was "sex hole." It's not meant in a degrading way. I was thinking of it as being sexual, not insulting. I can be a wife, a mother, web designer, writer, but I'm also sexual. Sometimes a lover for my husband, and sometimes I like to be a whore... for my lover. I get in my moods when I feel like a sex hole. Not a role that's forced on me. It's something I want!

I'm glad you responded. You made me think a little harder about what I wrote.

Now I'm going to go read your poems.

(Sometimes) Wicked (Sometimes not) Eve

 

[Guest]

Ah.....Now I feel better then!

Just worried there for a moment.

But good for you. I love a woman who enjoy's being a slut....being a naughty, dirty little wife once in a while. Sex is something that has many moods...from romantic, sensual, erotic, dirty, naughty....and whorey.

And I love a woman who's comfortable in any one of those modes......

To sleep.......perchance to dream - William Shakespear

I remain.........

 

[WickedEve]

Sex Hole and Sexy Cunt

Since you read my Sex Hole
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=28229
I read your One Sexy Cunt
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25261

I found it to be sexy: "With a cunt soft as velvet," and "Her lips spread and waiting, Glistening with dew."

And loving: "And so is the cuddling, As entwined now they sleep."

I liked it!

 

[muffdiver60]

I submitted my first poem, Sex Hole, and I'd love to have some feedback on it, please.


Hi, WickedEve, I loved it. The contrast of sensual and nasty (sex hole) got good to me.

Mike

 

[WickedEve]

Hi! Thank you, Mike. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
I have more you may want to check out...
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=57753
I'd love to hear any comments you may have on them.

Teasingly,
Wicked Eve

 

[RoamingSpirit]

WE,
I read a couple of your other poems so when I seen the thread on a new one by you I had to check it out. Another hottie! Keep them cumming!

 

[RoamingSpirit]

BTW

Forgot to mention that your story "I Like It Like That!" was pretty fucking hot too!

 

[WickedEve]

LOL... I got a flood of email on that one! It was a cute butt story! Quick, fun, and satisfying! At least, I've been getting email from some very satisfied readers!