serious feedback received

[PAUL C]

I like getting feedback but I am at a loss as to what this person is trying to say. I understand that he/she likes my story but the rest?

This message contains feedback for: PAUL C
About the submission: To Begin Again Ch. 01
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

I am delighted with the first chapter of your story!

<<She did need a shag.>>

I think that you have her PROBLEM exactly right, even in spite of her
past negative experiences. Indeed, I suspect that most SINGLE men and
woman have that problem once they have had intercourse!

Note particularly that the problem is inherent in the human species,
and is intended to PERPETUATE the species by means of unplanned
pregnancies as well as the long-term partnership(s) required to nurture children
to adulthood! :-(

link to story http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=181623

 

[Boxlicker101]

I certainly have to agree that most men and women do have a strong desire to fuck once they have experienced it. That sort of goes without saying. The fact that the desire is vital to the perpetuation of the species also goes without saying. Pregnancies, planned and otherwise, result from the sexual intercourse that results from the urge to fuck. Or shag, if you prefer. All these things are true but they are so obvious that it is hardly worth mentioning.

I think that he or she made a comment and then felt obligated to say more and just sort of babbled.