Sequel or No?

[StolenTurtle]

Just a board poll...everyone keeps asking for a second part to this story. When I originally wrote it, I had no intention of furthering their relationship, but the overwhelming majority of e-mails and comments suggest I should do otherwise.

I'd like anyone's opinion who is willing to read my story and let me know if you think this tale is worthy of a part deux.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=228528

I have a completely different story in this same category still pending approval, so more stories are on the way...

Your feedback is greatly appreciated!

-StolenTurtle

 

[wudelfin]

to continue or not?

In no way should you not continue. IMHO the measurements of a woman's breast size isn't needed unless your making a dress. Other than that your characters need wants and desires were well written.

 

[StolenTurtle]

Thanks!

In no way should you not continue. IMHO the measurements of a woman's breast size isn't needed unless your making a dress. Other than that your characters need wants and desires were well written.

Thanks for your prompt reply. I didn't learn how much the breast and penis sizes were scorned on this site until after I had posted this story. I read the "how to's" section before I submitted it and there was no real unanimity on the subject. Some said they liked it, others despised it with a passion. I thought I'd throw caution to the wind and add it anyway...I've learned my lesson. I have not bothered to duplicate my mistakes in my most recent submissions.

But I digress...

I would like to write a second part to this story, but I'm not sure there is anything else to say about them that would be terribly interesting. I've thought about having them be married when we next meet up with them, throwing in some infidelity on David's part and whatnot, but I'm not sure how a certain demographic of my audience (read: women) would appreciate that.

Any ideas on what in particular you would like to see from these two would be a tremendous help.

I'm also hoping to hear from more of you out there...stop lurking and pitch in. This is for all of you!!

Thanks again,

-StolenTurtle

 

[wudelfin]

how about?

an ex tries to break them up because they are a mixed couple. it takes a lot of trust to be in this type of relaionship.

 

[Darksyde]

Great story...really, REALLY hot.

If you want to do a second story w/ the same characters, then how about this for a scenario....

She has a roommate. A lonely roommate. Who masturbates a LOT. Rita starts bringing David her freshly worn panties, as he seems to fixate on aroma. Rita introduces them, and a wild 3 way breaks out, and Rita gets a REAL taste (Literally!) of why David loves the scent of a woman so much.

If you want to go for an extra fetish twist...maybe it's her sister...whatever you're into/want to portray to the reader.

 

[StolenTurtle]

Great Suggestion

an ex tries to break them up because they are a mixed couple. it takes a lot of trust to be in this type of relaionship.

Thanks for the great suggestion. That would be interesting to portray. Maybe have Rita's ex show up for a visit and throw a wrench in the relationship between her and David...jealousy ensues.

Sounds like a great story in the making to me...I'm glad I asked ya'll!!

I'll have to get started on this one right away.


Thanks again!

-StolenTurtle

 

[StolenTurtle]

Thanks!

Great story...really, REALLY hot.

If you want to do a second story w/ the same characters, then how about this for a scenario....

She has a roommate. A lonely roommate. Who masturbates a LOT. Rita starts bringing David her freshly worn panties, as he seems to fixate on aroma. Rita introduces them, and a wild 3 way breaks out, and Rita gets a REAL taste (Literally!) of why David loves the scent of a woman so much.

If you want to go for an extra fetish twist...maybe it's her sister...whatever you're into/want to portray to the reader.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the story.

I'll have to see about the whole 'threesome' thing. I know nothing of the subject and I'm not sure it's a storyline I would like to introduce into their romance. The setup I have for them is that they are in a loving, monogamous relationship and I think incorporating a third party would infringe on the trust they have for each other. (Plus, I like the idea of David only having the hots for Rita and no one else.)

I think the storyline is great, but maybe for a different story, although you have given me food for thought for a new tale.

I love getting suggestions from you guys, motivates me to write so much more.

Thanks everyone! Keep those suggestions coming!

-StolenTurtle