Sensual metaphors

hum....

My Erotic Trail said:
soild silk
over milked wood
sizzles the flesh
in the cool night's heat
sleepy dreams keep!

you still lingering on what the silk thing was I see... :eek:
 
I was mining around these parts last night. The gold found here, touches the heart and sizzles off the page. Great writing and pictures for inspiration Blue. Thank you, for alll this ...



:rose:
 
bluerains said:
Her heart writes doorways in sound.

Seasons of song beats memory,
crystalized in rhythm,
danced in timing,
from a wallflower watching bridges being burnt
in offering...
ipod uplinked...
mask detected...
submission required....
strings relinquished
servitude extracted
stasis strung
bio begun

http://k43.pbase.com/g4/97/383697/2/52146472.Dreaminginbluepbase.jpg


feeling ... blue! (grinin' (~_~)
 
the incoming tide
runs up the land
rivulets seeking
filling
washing
plundering
picks up the pace
as wave after heavier wave rock me
move me
lift me
pinned as i am to the land by
firm hand
still the rising waters take me
i cling to hand, head, flesh
as the waters threaten to tear me away
tear me loose from your moorings
and as the waves cover me
as i'm holding tight to you, dear
my inner chambers flood and rush
to meet
the ocean
and i'm left gasping
for breath
 
my skin a landscape


and i would have you write me a river
to flow over me
waters to wash me away
 
Given

Clue me
on your internet tendencies,
with abstract skin pearls.

I want to speak to your head.

I want you to ache inside me
till I awaken your shadows
to the tempest of my northern lights
in all directions .

Fading inside textures of your temple,
fearing the meaning of open,
I did become somewhere
called stillness,
your 24/7,
phallic focused.
http://circadianshift.net/images/1936.jpg
 
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she tasted the heat from your tropical rain
till her teeth chattered
from the chill of your meltdown
 
bluerains said:
YOU
glanced up from the pages on your book
YOUR
eyes matched mine
WE
hap connected
YOUR
welcome remained
MY
vision split
OUR
existence played forever
ITS
treasure twinkling
WE
blinked in climax
http://www.lashes.eyebeautytips.com/wp-content/uploads/thick_eyelashes.jpg


This is beautiful Blue. I love the visuals here, not so much the shouting but you do get the point acrosss with the formatting. Love it ~~ Submit ? Think so ...


:rose: :heart:
 
poetry while falling asleep at the keyboard

on the curve of the wave
the rise and fall
chest a warm deck beneath cheek
skin
moonlicked
evoked, a small lifting of hairs
a small stiffening of nipples
even though still lost in wamth and rhythmic liquid sleep

the sea's black oilstone blued by use
lit by flickers of imagination that see
eyelids holding secrets
dreams waiting to be breathed
and in the breathing, lived
 
the net

wanted aversion
repellant baits its lure
reel pulls tempation
then she remembered
you are still out there
fishing
 
quiet

still
falls distant
world thinks of you
naked rain wiped
yet
I am able
to miss an open door
to wash your poems
hard music
scrubed
unowned
 
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