Sensual metaphors

bluerains said:
He murmered words
like “forever and a day”.
I was carried away
till sunset sailed
upon poles apart
and state of mind sank.

sank into thought
mine mind's eye
saw the past
thinking about forever
living out the day
awaiting to be...

carried away!
 
bluerains said:
http://www.blueskyart.com/items/Edisto%20Garden%20Fairy.jpg

She was an immortal exception.

Restless as rattlings
on a snakes tail, she was.

Spine swiped by a fluttering flyer,
she spawned a butterfly tide of yearning.

She lay naked waiting
for the wind to change
while it rained on the horned
artist
who dared paint her picture.

umbrellas on trees
where a river weaves (~_~)

(ooops... lou anne and I share this computer and I didn't look to log in <grin,,, it's me... met!)
 
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Unbridled_Passion said:
umbrellas on trees
where a river weaves (~_~)

(ooops... lou anne and I share this computer and I didn't look to log in <grin,,, it's me... met!)

I know how you feel ..I have been quietpoet by mistake a few times...but, he bought himself a new mac and now I have the imac...yeah...ty...for the umbrella tree... ;)
 
bluerains said:
I know how you feel ..I have been quietpoet by mistake a few times...but, he bought himself a new mac and now I have the imac...yeah...ty...for the umbrella tree... ;)


He forgets to log out!
 
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bluerains said:
I know how you feel ..I have been quietpoet by mistake a few times...but, he bought himself a new mac and now I have the imac...yeah...ty...for the umbrella tree... ;)


congratulations on your green 'E'
 
How She Wears Her Skirt

My skirt sits, narrow, low on soothing hips,
And under it the cloth is mostly sheer.
Just watch. You'll get the tease from my soft lips,
And you may dream, since dreaming brings them near.
 
sun burned beach
and restless surf
reaching inward
rolling away
another day
me and 'captain morgan'
on castaway bay
 
FifthFlower said:
My skirt sits, narrow, low on soothing hips,
And under it the cloth is mostly sheer.
Just watch. You'll get the tease from my soft lips,
And you may dream, since dreaming brings them near.

I love your meter, this sings to me, FF

Beautiful stuff
 
thoughts

FifthFlower said:
My skirt sits, narrow, low on soothing hips,
And under it the cloth is mostly sheer.
Just watch. You'll get the tease from my soft lips,
And you may dream, since dreaming brings them near.

of Hips don't lie shake my morning on this dancing pen..ty...blue
 
Tuner

Somewhere between
tides and tunes,
buoyantly drifting,
senses bathe today away.
Then the rain returns,
tomorrow's torrential downpour
consuming my mind;
vanilla vibes
assimilated.
 
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Major Tom

Somewhere between
tides and tunes,
buoyantly drifting,
their senses bathe today away.
Then the wind returns, and
tears become
tomorrow's torrential downpour
consuming sunrise;
as vanilla vibes
assimilated.
 
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bluerains said:
http://www.timebomb2000.com/vb/images/avatars/Tair.jpg

He told me once
He’d be like a breath in the windstorm
of my life.
I know now, what he meant.
In his brilliance ,
ever chasing his brightness,
trying to fly over his light
instead of walking inside it
so I would not see him.
Now,
Somewhere between
tides and tunes,
buoyantly drifting,
my senses bathe today away.
Then the wind returns, and
tears become
tomorrow's torrential downpour
consuming sunrise;
my vanilla vibes
assimilated.

I liked the post before this one and then this addition sealed it nicely (~_~)
 
Major Tom

http://www.timebomb2000.com/vb/images/avatars/Tair.jpg

She couldn’t assure him in
subliminal advertising
designed to evoke emotive
heart pulse,
that her voltage veins
were undiluted.
Sometimes caution
pauses in silent swells
and quivers in vibes.

He told her once
he’d be like a breath in the windstorm
of her life.
She knew now, what it meant.
His brilliance,
ever chasing brightness,
trying to fly over his light
instead of walking inside it
so she would stir him.
Now,
Somewhere between
tides and tunes,
buoyantly drifting,
their senses bathe today away.
Then the wind returns, and
tears become
tomorrow's torrential downpour,
consuming sunrise
as vanilla vibes
assimilate.
 
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Lips

She entertains him with her words and thighs.
Her voice can giggle high, and when her lips
Move, their soft flesh would tease his searching eyes.
She loves it, when confused, his dark voice trips,
Which proves how hard it is, although he tries,
To watch her face, yet catch how her skirt slips.
Those pretty lips above, and those below,
Have got him, and that's all she cares to know.
 
Unconsenting Partners

Dark nights spent away from home:
Two adults consenting.
Black thoughts raging while they roam:
Two adults resenting.
Trying on somebody new--
Hatred never ending.
"Don't do what you want to do!"
What could break is bending.
 
unapologetic said:
Whoa... I know this stanza is going to get stuck in my head, but in a good way. Thanks for sharing.
He was hard as steel
dancing on bladed edge
points of light taken
 
Rubicon

Leaving the last idea
in the eyes of your examination room,
knowing the outcome may be tramatic,
you put on your headphones
to assure the mind was not listening.
 
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