Seeking speech writer for VY novel

[LongDraw]

This is what I typed up. What I'm hoping someone can do is rewrite the speech to proud motivational on the first half, and god-like/supreme being-like motivating on second half. This is for my published novel VY, this speech will appear in Chapter 11.

Welcome all to the proceedings for the Treaty signing at The Chamber of Introspection. Each of you has come before us today to acknowledge the terrible price that has been paid by not only humanity, but also by the planet and all life that inhabit it. We can never again permit such destruction to be wrought upon life on Earth.

This is where the expectations of all in the chamber are shattered and the real gravity of the consequences of their actions is cast upon them as Braedon as finished his greeting and continues by starting his declaration of terms for the treaty.

I know each of you came here with the expectation you would negotiate terms with each other before signing. As the head of House Owens, I am telling you that the terms have already been determined and each of you is being given a final ultimatum. Sign the treaty in the next 24 hours. Failure to comply will result in the non-compliant entity being removed from the timeline. Let me be completely transparent with you all, we are treating this proceeding as a zero-tolerance summary judgement. Any attempt to interfere with the enforcement of the treaty and its signing will result in removal from the timeline.

 

[LongDraw]

I see that there have been some views, but no responses to the thread. I figured I'd add in the link to the much more up-to-date version. I'll be splitting the novel up into multiple publications across the planned 25 total chapters.

 

[ElectricBlue]

Not sure how much response you'll get. Most writers focus on their own content, not someone else's. In essence you're asking for a co-writer for a story that's already started, but where's the incentive for another writer?

 

[LongDraw]

Share of royalties based on their total contributions to final publishing, based on percentage rounded up to nearest 0.01%

 

[KeithD]

Share of royalties based on their total contributions to final publishing, based on percentage rounded up to nearest 0.01%

The issue of not receiving response is largely that this is not the proper place (or Web site) to be placing a request for help on a profit-based project. There shouldn't be any royalties involved in a Literotica story project, and this area of the discussion board is for feedback on exclusively Literotica-published stories.

 

[LongDraw]

I already have the first 4 chapters published, and plan to submit another 4 chapters of the novel for publishing here.

 

[KeithD]

I already have the first 4 chapters published, and plan to submit another 4 chapters of the novel for publishing here.

Which doesn't have anything to do with your post on royalties, right? I responded to what you've actually posted in noting why, probably, you aren't getting response. You're most likely not getting response because your thread is improper. You're not asking for feedback on a Literotica story and you quite obviously are discussing a profit-seeking project elsewhere other than Literotica.

 

[LongDraw]

That chapter will be posted on Literotica, when it is completely done being written and edited. As for the entire novel being posted on Literotica, that's a decision I still have to make.