Seeking feedback

[SubTrainer]

Part I of a three-part series, The Transformation of Kathy, was just released here. It's an interracial story I wrote at the urgent of a fellow literotica member. Welcome to all feedback and criticism. Find it under the NEW STORIES category.

 

[driphoney]

I hate to say this, but you'll probably need to add a link directly to your story. We're lazy.