Seeking Feedback on Latest Story

[clownprince2008]

My newest story just got approved and I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it. I decided to move away from my normal romance stories and write a celebrity one, with the aim of making it somewhat believable and actually give it a story which is something I notice a lot of celebrity stories neglect.

General feedback is appreciated, but I'd especially like to know if it drags on a bit too much. It clocks in at about 2 1/2 pages.

Thanks in advance, here's the link.

http://www.literotica.com/s/reese

 

[johndoe2007]

Love the story. Really nice to see more Reese Witherspoon stories on here. However, seeing as the story is 3 pages, I think the build up almost overshadows the pay off. It's not a big complaint, but you seem to skip pass alot of the good stuff late in the story. But all in all, good solid read.

On a side note, I have read some of your other stories and I did notice you retread some old ground.