Would appreciate comments regarding my first story on this site: Producer and Director, posted in Novels/Novellas. It is relatively long and soft. I am seeking to tell a story that is plausible, and which can resonate with the readers as they think back on their initial sexual self discovery.
Also, how successful are the changes in point of view and seeing the same act through different eyes?
Thanks, Parrot
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=35486
Also, how successful are the changes in point of view and seeing the same act through different eyes?
Thanks, Parrot
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=35486
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