Seeking Editor, pegging, sharing, sub

[PaulnVic]

Hello;

This is my first time posting. My de-flowering message so to speak so please be gentle.

I have been an avid reader on Literotica for years and only recently decided to write a story. It has a variety of themes which includes some gentle Dom/Sub, pegging, male cum eating and wife sharing. I have reached out to an editor but it has been a few days past the 72 hours and I realise this editor may not be available. With that thought, I came here seeking an editor.

I would love to hear from anyone interested in giving my story a read and being brutally honest. I can take it. I am not a wallflower that will wilt and die from some constructive, off the hip, criticism. I encourage it actually.

Looking forward to hearing from anyone interested. Thank you.

Paul

 

[PaulnVic]

I guess everyone is very busy. It is understandable considering the size of this place. I guess I will submit and hope my self-edit will suffice. Wish me luck.

 

[usmcsgt7175]

if you are still interested in someone reading your story i will be glad to read and offer my comments. i have been a long time reader of erotic literature but have never read any erotica as an editor.

 

[PaulnVic]

if you are still interested in someone reading your story i will be glad to read and offer my comments. i have been a long time reader of erotic literature but have never read any erotica as an editor.

Thank you for replying. I broke down and submitted it today but I would love to have some feedback from anyone interested in this sort of story. If you would like to PM me your email I would be happy to send a .doc file to you or copy and paste it into the email.