exiled_oblivion
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- Sep 6, 2009
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I'm looking for an editor for a story I'm writing (unsurprisingly).
I've posted the first part already (a mistake, with hindsight), and after reading some feedback I came to the conclusion that I need an editor. The first part is here:
https://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?url=droplet
It does get considerably hotter than what I've posted.
There's about another 7000 or so words on top of what has been posted so far, and I would say that it's nearly complete.
There is no controversial material in it (unless you find the celebrity section as a whole offensive - yes, these people do exist).
I guess the kind of editing I'm after is to do with structure, and maybe the odd grammar mistake here and there.
And making sure that it all actually makes sense and is understandable - I have a habit of either explaining stuff too much, or not enough. That classic thing of not realising I haven't put enough information down on paper because in my head I can see the whole scenario and know how it all works.
I am from the UK, so obviously there will be spelling differences if you're used to US English.
If you're interested in doing more than just this one story, I have another one half written, but it'll be months before I get anywhere close to completion. I have a fairly large basket of ideas I want to work through, some of which are wildly different from Droplet.
At the risk of offending someone, I think I would prefer a female editor, mainly because I want to know whether I've got the sensations that the characters feel correct (I'm male, so obviously have no idea what it feels like to e.g. have one's clitoris licked), or whether I'm way off the mark.
I've posted the first part already (a mistake, with hindsight), and after reading some feedback I came to the conclusion that I need an editor. The first part is here:
https://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?url=droplet
It does get considerably hotter than what I've posted.
There's about another 7000 or so words on top of what has been posted so far, and I would say that it's nearly complete.
There is no controversial material in it (unless you find the celebrity section as a whole offensive - yes, these people do exist).
I guess the kind of editing I'm after is to do with structure, and maybe the odd grammar mistake here and there.
And making sure that it all actually makes sense and is understandable - I have a habit of either explaining stuff too much, or not enough. That classic thing of not realising I haven't put enough information down on paper because in my head I can see the whole scenario and know how it all works.
I am from the UK, so obviously there will be spelling differences if you're used to US English.
If you're interested in doing more than just this one story, I have another one half written, but it'll be months before I get anywhere close to completion. I have a fairly large basket of ideas I want to work through, some of which are wildly different from Droplet.
At the risk of offending someone, I think I would prefer a female editor, mainly because I want to know whether I've got the sensations that the characters feel correct (I'm male, so obviously have no idea what it feels like to e.g. have one's clitoris licked), or whether I'm way off the mark.
