Seeking editor for first story

[eddie_winter]

I'm wading into the shallow end of the pool and wanting to share one short story to begin. It is just over 800 words. It centers around a familiar theme - male hubby and female babysitter (NOT underage!). But the primary focus is around teasing, some hints of premature ejaculation, forced orgasm and erotic humiliation.

If anyone would be willing to read and offer any feedback, I would be grateful.

Thanks!

 

[HeyAll]

Sure, i can take a look.

Pm me or send it to my email listed in profile.