Seeking Editor/Beta Reader for 42k Sci-Fi/Fantasy Bondage Story

LockeAndKey

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I've written a 42k word sci-fi/fantasy bondage behemoth about a dystopian society on a distant planet where the plutocracy's evil is law (this is a flippant way of putting it for the sake of getting a point across quickly, it's not actually that black-and-white). Contains lesbian sex scenes and while there aren't any hetero sex scenes, that was mostly because I never found a good reason to have one, male/female sexualized scenes happen without any exchange of bodily fluids. Also, while none of the actual sex is noncon a lot of the sexualization is, so while there's nothing that meets the legal definition of rape, it might be rape-y enough to put off the sorts of people who are put off by that kind of thing.

42k is very large so I understand if a lot of people don't have the time to muscle through all of it, however knowing how far someone got and what made them stop can be almost as useful as a proper editing all the way through, so please consider just poking at it until you get bored if you don't have time to go over the entire thing.
 
I've written a 42k word sci-fi/fantasy bondage behemoth about a dystopian society on a distant planet where the plutocracy's evil is law (this is a flippant way of putting it for the sake of getting a point across quickly, it's not actually that black-and-white). Contains lesbian sex scenes and while there aren't any hetero sex scenes, that was mostly because I never found a good reason to have one, male/female sexualized scenes happen without any exchange of bodily fluids. Also, while none of the actual sex is noncon a lot of the sexualization is, so while there's nothing that meets the legal definition of rape, it might be rape-y enough to put off the sorts of people who are put off by that kind of thing.

42k is very large so I understand if a lot of people don't have the time to muscle through all of it, however knowing how far someone got and what made them stop can be almost as useful as a proper editing all the way through, so please consider just poking at it until you get bored if you don't have time to go over the entire thing.

pm'd you...:)
 
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